OMG guys I think he's gonna get his eyes back and come looking for her and mistaking my baby with the evil sis. I can't do misunderstandings oh please let me be wrong
im gonna flip is dis happens.
We need raws! We need raws so bad
They’re up-to-date unfortunately!!
It's been suuuuch a long time since I've read something that actually touched my heart like this. The story's well paced and goes smoothly. Their emotions are humane: they're not always sure but also do get the hints
Genuinely loved it
Wow almost 10 years ago... she was the one of the earliest pick me-sapiens
Guys I've let this marinate for quit a while
Should i pick it up again? The story didn't take a weird turn to cliche did it?
No cliche yet. But nothing clear as well
Not really cliche but it feels insanely contrived to me
u should, this one is niceeee, id say 50% cliche and 50% mmm not really
So I didn't really read it i just saw a brief preview from the photo and OH MY GOD IT LOOKS ABSOLUTELY FUCKED UP. not wondering why the low rating tbh
The story sucks and its abuse after abuse.
For anyone who wants to start reading here's my review:
I can see that the plot had potential but writing and pacing ruined it. Everything's too obvious. You don't have to explain everything but rather show it with expressions, behaviour and character developments.
The art looks shiny and that's about it. It doesn't have the fundamental structures. The characters look stiff. As an artist myself I just couldn't get over this gorgeous hollow diamond.
Aah that was so cheesy