
Man- ig this ain't my taste of story huhu. I really tried to read it but the more I read, the more I feel like "something ain't right"
Like... Okay dude f you lol
I read peoples comment on how this dudes mentality is still young compared how he looks but.. okay? Will I forgive a kid who purposely stabs someone to death just cuz they r young? No??
I just feel like.. there's really something wrong here ( ̄∇ ̄") like when I learned he remembers everything, I was like "yeah- go f u lol"
First life- sure kill them off. Yur so angry you can't think straight but the second? The third? Bros just excusing for mass murder. No research who innocent or nah? Okay damn.
Hm- maybe cuz the mentality of the ml is like a murderer with the sign Revenge on his forehead.
Also- the MC.. girl- plz.. don't fall for him or it'll be Stockholm syndrome all over again T~T
Falling Inlove with yur killer cuz *insert ML excuse* is my most hated type of stories huhu
For the from enemies to lovers comments... What enemies? I can't see it. All I can see is 2 victims but one is on a killing streak ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭
If y'all want enemies to lovers in this type of setting, it would be MC taking over the daym house, punishing bad peeps, killing his dad, and then want to protect herself from ML. ML and MC fights cuz they either still want revenge or want to survive. Then that's when enemies to lovers come in.
Anyway~ the idea ain't that bad but some choices r not for me. Might pick up again if ever the future of this story is more on my type.
Reasons why Hylli or Hylee is like this~
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Hylli is going through his Royal drama~
Basically- he learned who his real mother is and what the royal family did to her. She was kidnapped and raped and was forced to birth hylli. After that, the queen put a curse on her to go mad and slowly dieeeeee~
Her madness makes her hate hylli (my poor boi- ready yourselves if you really love our boi hylli) to the point she scratches and throws things to people. She wants him ded.
Due to this reasons~ hylli has been questioning if the people he trust is actually trustworthy.
... That's the reason- y'all can wait what will happen after hehehe
The hair part is so that her mother won't hate him. The king has black hair so- yeee~ fuck him
Thanks for the spoiler.. it's pasts 1:30am here and got a cliffhanger, almost sleeping without any clue.