Plz be more careful how you show yourself. A simple look from you makes me pregnant and drool a lot ( yes, i just found myself drool in the bath scene. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
The story is interesting but... the MC is quite naive. She didn't even tried to know the true personality of the child. It also bothers me that she's quite a weakling. Not my type of story but nice theme.
Mine is Isaac and Chris. They are just so hilarious and cute at the same time. And very loyal and reliable. ( even tho Chris still did bad things for the greater good.)
I also love the three older brothers in the end. Too bad theyre not that important to be included to the main story.
First, Oscar... I love that you care for Aria but yur a facking pushover. And yur only inlove with the nice angel side of her. You havent seen her true color.
Second, Asher... I love that rebel side of you but are you inlove with Aria or are you just using her?
And next the second character males.
Kain? ( forgot the name but the step brother ) Yur facking disgusting. Looking at yur sister like that after what youve done! Freakinh ahole.
And Rain! OMayghad dude i LOVE YOU!
Oh yah hear that? Its the sound of angry readers cuz of the cliffhangers.
GIRL DEDASS OMFG I WAS LETTING THE CHAPTERS BUILD UP SO I WOULDNT GET LEFT ON A CLIFFHANGER AND HERE WE ARE
oh what a life it is, am i right?
Dedass ♀
LEN IS SUCH A BAD BOI SWEETHEART!!! TOTALLY MY TYPE! ( and sike for me that irl theres no such man! well in my perspective)
I say that they are facking closed up to others cuz of this telepathy thing they always do! They forgot to speak loud! and its driving me crazy! If they just open up their mouths then there wont be a problem! ( and i know they are scared to talk back cuz they think theyll be killed if they do! But i think its more annoying if the person yur talking to doesnt talk back. i would have killed them if they do that to me XD ) and i dont think the reincarnation stuff is necessary. I love isekai but the fact that they are reincarnated and they dont use it in their advantage is pissing me off. ( for example is their opinion about their dad. Like have they even considered " Why would he keep us even thought our biatch mother is dead and it only ruins his name?" ( cuz what they think he did is he kept the biatch alive cuz of some agreement to keep him alive. ) is facking stupid and being 18 in their previous life and still doesnt understand how to deal with people and being courageous to fight that nasty people and handling their mom is giving me the " are they spoiled in their previous life?" cuz that would be ironically awesome to add in the story. aside from that, the only think that reincarnation stuff that helped them is that they dont think as 5 years old but they dont act like 18, 23 or whatever years old either.
I know right. Their bullshit is pissing me off. They seriously could have taken out the reincarnation part and it would almost make no difference. and I also think they being spoiled in their previous life would be hilarious. I got into the story cause I like children parent stories and isekai and reincarnation, but mostly cause I felt somewhat identified by the characters as I have a twin brother and in many cases it has only been the 2 of us so I kind of relate to them. But they are pissing me off.
It’s pretty obvious that the author didn’t think all of this through. I have noticed a lot of unreasonable bs happening in this story and it’s starting to piss me off. Abuse isn’t a good enough reason to be that defensive or unreasonable because as 19 year olds, it is common knowledge that they are basically adults, meaning that they have the maturity and knowledge in thinking regarding serious situations. It feels as if the flow and narrative is too over-the-top to the point that I’m questioning whether or not the author is treating their characters as real people. Everything feels forced and to be honest, the reincarnated part’s only purpose seems to make the story and the twins interesting. I personally think that is unnecessary as it makes the story seem messy. It is quite obvious that to show the twins’ maturity, the author portrayed them to make decisions that affected their future. However, they were deciding on things using their emotions, completely ignoring the details and perspective of others. Assuming everything has to do with them negatively, which is really illogical and inconsiderate of others. Of course, it doesn’t change the fact that they were abused, yes. But, as adults, it was amusing that they weren’t thinking with their mental age regarding how the royal family treated them. It was like they wouldn’t accept the fact that they were welcoming them with open arms. They get offended by the simplest things, making me wonder, ‘what drives people to understand them, their defensive personality or how their situation makes them vulnerable?’
I totally agree with you. And you know I have been thinking, why did they endure so much abuse from their mother. After all they are mentally 19 years old or whatever so they are adults already. Given their circumstances being under that much stress could easily turn them "evil" so why didn't they do something. Think about I understand that as 3 or less when their mobility was very limited they couldn't do anything to defend themselves or fight back. But seeing then move around talk about going to the forest and climbing up a tall ass tree made it sound like physically they were quite capable for at least the past 2 years, not to mention their mother always came to them drunk. So with enough tripping hazards and maybe a bit of a push they could have trow her out of the window and pretend it was an accident as she was always drunk. Like as a person there is only so much you can take before you retaliate. Its a bit messed up,But somehow it would have been better that what actually happened. I am not going to be too critical about it, but her getting impaled by a random tree after falling drunk just seem to convenient. And is not like she did not deserved it deserved. What do you think.
I hate the ending soooooooooooooooooooooooo much. LIke i want to put a middle finger to the sky! Like wtf!? Why do we have to read a freaking sad story of Junseo's past if hes not getting a happy ending?
Next is the main character is dumped! Yet he's still head over heels for the freaking dude! LIKE COME ON MAN!!! MAN UP A LITTLE! Be mean to him! Be angry! Be hard to get and not a push over!
And I really hate how hes treating Junseo. I know he only sees him as a friend! but damn! thats just messed up!
i enjoyed it... but i didnt like it. it was fun reading it but i was dissapointed. very.
i soooo agree i was soo mad at the ending i felt soo bad for our boy Junseo's like they want him to suffer after he went through that experience and the mc i thought that he will end up with Junseo's because he got rejected by his crush but nooo i will not give up my crush and whats up with the crush first you rejected him but then you date him like if you rejected him then stand on your decision
Its really stressful lol.
Diego X Alejandro! (๑•ㅂ•)و✧