It was such a cute story, i think the author wanted to keep it short so they cleared the misunderstandings and evil schemes way fast. Though the story had so much potential instead of just ending it in 30 chapters. I wad waiting for more misunderstandings to pile up till the ml grovel to hard for his cruel actions. Maybe it's because I've read too many red flag mls that I thought he'd let the siblings treat her worse before torturing them as hell.
But oh well still enjoyed it.
Not seeing the step parents (specially stepmother) plan evil schemes against fl is kinda surprising tbh, they kinda add twists to stories.
I like the ml obsession, but isn't it a little too early to confront him only on one event? I was waiting for some solid obsessive behaviors before being caught.
Well the stories is nothing new, but i think I'll stick around for few more chapters
Imagine waiting 14 days just for a chapter with their single scene you read in 10 sec
I was not readyy for the kiss!! Though i did expect the slow burn to hit where he starts dating other women to forget her and fl regretting rejecting him, making efforts to confess to him, i think we got to see them dating a little too soon but oh well!! CJBXGXHSHE I DIEEDDD
Tbh he's a lil too clingy, yes he's a cute puppy and is so adorable but it's very annoying when someone so blindly clings to you and doesn't even give you personal space.
Maybe if we could have a little character development filled with angst, this could be my fav piece
There are so many gaps that my head hurts. It just seems the author just wanna end this story with no details. We don't know what was their reaction to the father's death? what happened to the brother? Why haven't they still run away despite being married? How come Noah suddenly comes in the frame with no context?
The plot seemed interesting in the beginning but all of a sudden it adapted a creepy plot with obvious plot holes.
Such a disappointment
When everything was falling into place she just had to 'pretend' to be smart and ruin it all!! Though i hope she's just pretending and not actually betraying Fin