Moon Pies want to read (All 321)
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EVERY WRITER ON THE PLANET NEEDS TO TAKE NOTES! This is how you write a d’aman love story. Equal parts mystery, heartache and longing.
That's true... This reminds me of how old romance stories were written that doesn't just serve one POV and by serve I mean in favor of one Character. Or at least to those that I remember.
The story isn't only being told it was telling itself, and we get that because the characters weren't added as an ornament for the sake of it that seems to be a trend for years. In here they add to the events as if they were alive and we're reading about lives of real people.
To write like this is sometimes hard to do though, so kudos to the author of Broken Ring and those who tried.
Does anyone else keep getting logged out of here? Randomly it’ll tell me that this website isn’t available with a white screen and the only thing I can do is clear my safari cache and pray.
Only if I haven't checked the page in like a whole day or so, other wise I can stay logged in (⊙…⊙ )
It’s so frustrating. I’ll get the white screen several times a day
That's definitely odd (⊙…⊙ )
Was anyone else facing MAJOR issues with the site recently? Mine was very slow to load and often times just a blank white screen.
I love how they represent Christianity in this story as well. It’s not a vehicle for hate but gives strength and clarity. It’s very realistic. Sometimes they’re angry with God, sometimes they read the bible for comfort.