It was a good read. I loved how it started and how it progressed. However, I find it hard to process a lot of plot holes. The story is unfinished, they only plastered "The End" since the MC and the ML got their happy ending.
Few questions were left unanswered like:
- We need more explanation about that transmigration ability of the siblings. It was a sudden plot twist. Also, I'd say, they're living in world far more interesting than the world where the MC transmigrated into. What happened to their fight? Apart from money, what other value does the ring has? What happened to the book? Judging from the brother's obsession and his sister's description of him, he won't stop at nothing so he would search the ocean, surely.
- Who is that woman? Maybe a neighbor?
- The ending was rushed. It's very noticeable. The drama that was supposed to follow was not justified.
ANDDDDDDDDD I need more story of Mujin. Hahah The ML has others holding him up, but Mujin has nothing. I find him interesting. I was expecting Mujin and the brother to end up together, actually. I would love to read more if the brother pulled Mujin to the real world with him in exchange to the MC and the plot will roll from there. That would be far more unique among transmigration stories.
The artist really love the seme's body. The curves and muscles - the whole physique! I love his scales.
I. WAS. WAITING. FOR. THE. ANGST. BUT. I. STILL. SEE. A. LOT. OF. PINK. FLOWERS. AND. BUTTERFLIES.!!!!!! I WANT THE DRAMA! WHERE IS THE DRAMA!!?!!?
Can someone tell me which chapter is this in the novel?
I've read the novel and I love how friendship was portrayed in this story. From the beginning to the end, it was pure and genuine. All 4 of them care for each other, life and death. Their bods are strong to topple as they protect one another.
It's unlike other stories where the friend harbor feelings to the other.
Okay, I think we'll see another seme from Third Ending.
I want to know the author's perspective on love. Kinda twisted, creepy, and totally broken. However, I also question my vision of it as I fuckin love this kind of genres. My moral compass is out of the window.
This was supposed to be the time when I would be jumping for joy and kicking my sheet, but I've been laughing all along. Hahaha I wish I'm thick as him when I'm doing public speaking. Dang. Hahahhh He's so real with that "dumb it down" hahah
The ocean. Dang, it's always there... always the ocean.
"Wonyoung's wife"? Who was it again? So, that fine lady is already wearing a ring?
Chapter 1 and the cover fooled me of who the bottom is. (●'◡'●)ﾉ
Ahh, why does Mirai appear weak to me even though she should be strong and powerful, considering that she's one of the feared beings in their universe? Am I missing something?
Up until now, aside from emotional aspects, it has always been Rider and Aia going all out even during their search of Shalam. I don't know. I just don't see Mirai's potential in terms of being powerful, I'm sorry, and it irks me. Hahaha Also, If Aia could transform, she's the best candidate as a mother figure than Mirai.
The slow burn is really satisfying. Reading the marinated mature version after the R15 cured me. Also, I LOVE HOW CLEAR AND HIGH HEADED THEY ARE. They work with their brain, not with emotions.
I really love the story about the interloper. It's interesting and creepy. It sent shivers down my spine. You know what, sexual tension would be better in this kind of genre. The rape was kinda out of it, considering that the ML is a supernatural being. Sexual tension will not only add to the charm of both character, but will also jive with the mystery genre. Though, overall, I love it.
"It's a very long time and it's a miracle that I didn't go insane, or maybe I am insane all along."
Dang, bro, he hit the spot here. The ending, for me, is good and creepy. Good that the ML is happy (HAHAHAHAH), but also creepy knowing the the ML can burn it in just a second. How creepy it is thinking that even in death, you can't run away? Hahah
Also, please, the ML's situation is no different from a fish in a tank.