I like the story but there's something off-- like the flow of the story, it just skips scene to scene and sometimes expects the readers to just understand what's happening. It needs more in between from dialogs and scenes
Or the past few chapters were all out of place? Couldn't understand a thing, the pages were not in the correct order. Got better with the new updates but damn. Missed a good chunk of the story.
Thinking of dropping this but on the fence on it. The story flow is kinda wonky, it feels like there's missing panels but there's none, the scene just jumps from one to another
I like the story but there's something off-- like the flow of the story, it just skips scene to scene and sometimes expects the readers to just understand what's happening. It needs more in between from dialogs and scenes
I agree it’s going way too fast
RIGHT? Like a lot of happening so quickly and it kind of glosses over things that should have a bit more explanation
I know what your saying