
I love you, Louie, but wasn't your priority getting your husband & the soldiers back home without any more bloodshed??? I'm guessing the deal being broken off is somehow still going to end the war, but why would you allow even the slimmest chance of it not ending??? Ahhhhhhhhhh. Just give us the happy ending already, I've had enough of this angst LMAO

What a frustrating read. You're rlly telling me a grown-ass man with so much dating experience (even tho he was cheated on...) had noooo idea that the alpha was romantically interested from the beginning? I'd believe it from a teenager, but not an adult. His logic for never telling the alpha about his child was just absurd.
Also, probably personal taste, but dating someone who was interested in ur sibling is gross.... I can't give a proper review on their story because I skimmed it. I'd preferred if they paired any of them with the alpha's blonde secretary. Since he didn't know either of them, it could have been a proper fresh start.

I was hoping the (not) brothers had a final sweet, consensual confession of their feelings.... All their scenes were always depressing AF. Crying or with dubious consent. I wanted to see them happy. But with all the comments being so hateful of the pink-haired guy I can imagine why the author rushed their ending. Pretty disappointed about that.

It's on indefinite hiatus but it's not hard to guess what comes next.... Just more misunderstandings & drama dragging out the confession scene since they both love each other since the beginning.....
(Was this story rlly dropped because the author was getting harassed for the incest??? That's like..... The least horrifying thing going on in this story LMAOOO)

I honestly expected the big brother & Jace to meet at the end and make up their own toxic yaoi couple lmao JUST A LITTLE EXTRA TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM. This story was a really good exploration of the cycles of abuse. About how people who were abused can go on to become abusers themselves, or victims, once again. And the cycle was broken for uke. Yay for him! Now, I wanna know about the OTHERS.
Not all stories need to be heavy in plot & emotional character development, or whatever. This is just a simple puppy-love romance. I love stories like this. Where the main conflict is just that they like each other too damn much lmao I wish we'd gotten a side-story of them living together in college, or as working adults, at least......
I know you guys are disappointed Yuri didn't get a side-story, but tbh I was paying more attention to the cute best friend with the big blue eyes. I was rlly praying he'd get a little romance too even tho I knew he wouldn't.... lol