
i'm a bit bothered with the art style on how hinata was depicted but what's with people saying kageyama is a pedophile omg, can yall like chill down cause what's important here is that the both of them are almost the same age, yall are like saying a 40 year old babyfaced person is considered a minor tf now. and did i just fucking saw a comment about u.s laws when this was made in japan and the fact yall go on and compare this doujinshi which is full of just DRAWINGS to real children says a lot. maybe if yall go defend actual children than rant here then maybe yall contributing for a better change. and fyi there are already a lot of erotic fictions about minors but they are only considered CONTROVERSIAL because fiction. what do yall not get about fiction. the feedback can be negative but it is not illegal so take your law bullshit away.

idk the art doesn't appeal to me much since the faces are somewhat weird ( ̄∇ ̄") but you gotta appreciate the details and designs done in each panels cause they are sooooo beautiful and the time and effort too is something you just can't throw out of the bus!! though how the story is progressing so far is kinda rushed, like she just breathed then lost weight lmao. i do hope that as the story goes, something will somewhat not go on her way and requires more thinking and efforts for her to surpass that for more drama hihi, and i especially liked how she considered not taking the spotlight about the discovery of that magic wood benefits thingy and made it her little secret is so refreshing too see. ヾ(☆▽☆)
lmao i was floored when she said that killing the three was boring cause they died way too easily