
i feel like you can kind of tell this was d.jun's first work, the art and story has improved considerably in here u are. it's not bad at all, the story itself is very sweet and the emotions are captured and shown in a great way. there were a few plot holes but other than that this was amazing for a debut work

so i guess this is a criticism of shark fin soup and shark fin used as a chinese medicine... whenever i got good grades as a kid my parents would always treat me to shark fin soup because it's expensive, now i feel bad. they should really ban it, there's no way to farm it without disrupting the ecosystem

I understand why people complain that this is written badly and the plot is going in circles, but that's just real life. People are unable to figure out their feelings, and it's impossible for a problem to be solved just like that and happily ever after. It's frustrating because this is fiction and readers want to see a conclusion, but also props to the author for going at their own pace honestly.
that relatable moment when you finally summon the courage to confess to your crush and then immediately whip out your peen