this book started out good with its story and buildup and everything.... but unfortunately as it progressed i became *not* the target audience for this anymore........ oh well. time to just move on to better stuff
started reading this around august in 2021... six chapters in two years...
so real
i had to reread from the start on its most recent update because i forgot what it was about. i fear i have to reread it again if it updates in a few months
HELPPP I DO THIS WITH EVERYTHING THAT GETS AN UPDATE IF I HAVENT READ IT FOR AT LEAST 3 MONTHS even with consistently updating ones i always reread the previous chapter bc i got a shit memory
HARD SAME wow here with u in solidarity cheers to having memory loss at a young age
i get you............its been a struggle for every chapter (￣ε(#￣)Σ
im just glad we weren't left hanging and this is still being continued... sigh.. this is me counting blessings
just imagine screaming the name helbert during sex lmao
At that point you'd just start saying Hal
i mean what even will the nicknames be??? " hel"???? "BERT" ?????? smfh suddenly "master" sounds more appealing
im gonna be honest. with the same author as Two Souls this book is a bit of a letdown
Yea, I really liked Two Souls, but this story is weird and frustrating from the start.
Two soul is a good story but this eknsbhskwjebrjie I don't know what to say
"he looks too feminine" "looks like a girl" "like a princess , damsel in distress BLAH "
men can literally look like anything, same goes for women. you would know this if you step out of your house for once. dont piss me off
i understand everyone wanting justice and if it were up to me i personally want to wrap my hands around that man's neck and strangle him to death. that part was definitely unresolved but this is just a very short read, a short story, and the focus was them getting together (also as indicated by the summary). the whole thing abt mc being SA'd was just a part of his background story hence the focus and resolve about it will never be highlighted
and some other story flaws here and there but i always gotta remind myself that with a 6-chapter story it can't be possible to cram every single resolutions. one might argue that the author shouldn't have included those flaws and i agree. just spilling a different side of perspective here (=・ω・=)
Completely agree op!! by chapter 5 i was already accepting that tou wont be getting the resolution/justice he deserves bc no way all of that emotional trauma and conflict can be wrapped up in one chapter lol unless the author makes another volume (ﾟωﾟ)….
right?? like if the plot was supposed to circle around his dark past, and how him and seme would try to navigate through it together, then i believe that that is where the story *should* be headed to. but this was mainly about them and their destined meet ups that eventually turns into a relationship between them (￣∇￣")
i dont think i'd be able to get past the familial ties to the romance
the art is so CRISP mama wow mwah mwah mwah chefs kiss MWAH