
The story was so rushed I could barely understand shit + the bottom has LITERALLY 0 chemistry with the top, 90% of their so-called "chemistry" was just them saying "I'll die in your stead" to each other like what the fuck does that even contribute to the story, you mean to tell me they just fell in love overtime because they were willing to sacrifice their lives for each other? That's not how it works, m8—that shit only has an effect when the couple has actual fucking chemistry, NOT THE PART WHERE THAT'S THEIR ENTIRE CHEMISTRY
Also, how the fuck did the blonde ML have more chemistry with the guy by simply just fucking him and wanting to own him? It honestly baffles me that this dude started out by straight up just having sex with him on the God damn spot and for fuck's sake he somehow managed to pull off being a better pair with the top lol.
At this rate, with both bottoms straight up falling out of favor, just write a better bottom... ffs.
To whoever uploaded this:
Thank you so much from the bottom of my right boob, I SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU FOR THISSS
I’m gonna take that right boob phrase
Wait I love that! But isn't the heart the left boob?
Yes lol but I didn’t mean to signify the heart in this line, I just meant to use any other part of the body (in this case I ended up using my right boob rofl)
PS. I initially used ball sack but then I realized I didn’t have one
Real (I don’t have a ballsack either)
LOL i get that! Every time I laugh my left side hurts so I always say my left appendix is in pain.