I loved this but found it hard to read at times, there are issues with the pacing, and not a lot of background explanations.
For ex, I’m still confused on who the cousin with the scar on his neck is compared to the past, and whether he really remembered it or was just foreshadowing. He was an ass at first, so I feel like he should have had some sort of real redemption or not been brought up again. The guy from America seemed like more of a costume villain the way he was handled. Also, I get that Moon babe is rich, but the rescue was brushed over quite fast for how dire the situation was. I think that could have used a little suspense.
Meanwhile, *actual* evil old guy, I understood him, but the past buildup was... underwhelming. The past twist was actually really good, I didn’t see that coming (I really didn’t), but the evil old guy didn’t make sense to me as a villain bc he had no background. If anyone should have motive, it should have been him bc of the way he is shown as the literal villain who made this story start in the first place.
The kids are cute, okay. I saw the pregnancy coming and actually enjoyed that, but I still don’t know how old they are. Why wasn’t that mentioned? And for a guy in a coma with atrophy, Moon sure got walking around quick. It would’ve been nice to see some of the kid’s personality, even 1 or 2 spreads. I think that could have been in a chapter to show him in his recovery and actually meeting them considering how important his waking up was rather than be props. Kids are flexible, but still he was a stranger..
Overall, this was cute, but I think a lot was left out in what seemed to be a rush. I would have liked even for the main relationship to develop rather than seem like “Oh you like me? Kya, let’s date~”. I didn’t see a real build for that even though its important to the actual universe (dragon pearl).
Also, I’m only up to 39.5, maybe there will be more that is better, but this would be a lot of chapters in to start writing better. Still, I would gladly continue because this is interesting (or, it could be).
Just wanted to share my feelings.
I'm pretty sure I've been reading this for like five years. I'm not even mad xD I just find it funny that I am still here. The hard part is re-reading the whole thing again every time I remember to come back bc I have the memory of a snail x')
I want to go back to the time when I first read it. Because No matter how many times you re read it, it doesn't give off the same fascination ┗( T﹏T )┛
;-; ugh yes... that first time it was so exciting and asami was this hot badass. Now he’s like whipped by akihito tm
Yes, I liked akhito's character development
And asami's as well(๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Like I last read ch 55, that is how long my fool self forgot about this manhua
and now I'm seeing these comments LMAO like damn I forgot the drama I left behind
TT_TT now I have to read it... agh
So then I have like 4 chapters or so.... and oh boy :’) my heart sure couldn’t take Mo in 317 and 318. The way He Tian has become his safe place and he doesn’t even know it.
Their age gap is so cute and I love how Tetsuya wants to show off for Oumi-san too. I always wished this had a continuation because imo it is the most coherent and best story this author has written. I feel like this is a part of my classics that I can go back to to relax
I will never forget this story, and even had to support a few chapters on lehzin because I am just blown away that I got to experience this.
Like, if you haven't read this yet, what is you doin baby??
Already laughing in the club