great job on the translations!!!
can't wait to read the next chap!! *o*
i love the comments of the translator team! xD great job!
I have a feeling this will be a looooooooooooooooooooooooong story^^
A tipp for english grammar - the most outstanding mistake was the ignorance of the singular form of "to be" --> He/she/ it + IS!! ...not are! ^_- There is a saying that goes: >> He, she, it - the "s" have to come with it.<<
So, for other verbs it's also: he goES.. or she smileS...for example ^_-
Hope that helps! It's fine to get better at english step by step! KEEP IT UP!
eeeto....I like the previous story better...although it was also quite disturbing in the middle...
http://www.77mh.com/colist_206556.html
thank you!