chicken_veeng's manga / #smut(675)

HOLY SHIT I LOVE THIS AUTHOR. i love their style of manga and their writing. the characters and how fucked up it was amazing but i love the way the pages were made bc i rly felt immersed and like you could feel the way the characters felt. it also felt like u were also going a lil insane which i loved. 10/10 for the author. 8/10 for the story bc i felt like it could've been explained more of what happened after the hypnosis and i feel like it was kinda brushed over. and the amount of smut at the end was not enough bruh. bc they really teased the whole manga and there was only so little at the end which was kinda sad but overall love the vibes and it was rly weird and good. slay

that was rly cute and everything. i rly liked tho how they focused on them getting into a relationship and a lot of their arguments and shit like that which was rly funny. i do kinda wish tho that they showed more of the tops thought process of why he liked the other guy bc it kinda just felt like after sleeping with him he couldn't stop thinking abt him and it magically turned into romantic attraction. and i kinda wished there was more abt the romantic part of their relationship and exploring more than the key point of why they "fell for each other", which was their passion ig and wanting to compete with each other, and looking at other things they liked. don't get me wrong the whole thing was rly good and the reason i would rate it so high and liked it a lot was bc of the leads chemistry and how they rly did complement each other. i did rly like the narrative tho, that the bottom especially was going through shit abt not being himself. bc he kept getting dumped for essentially being better and more successful than his exes. but then he was able to see and find the top who would constantly compete with him in everything. even tho they didn't fully go into it, i liked the concept of him discovering that loving someone doesn't mean sacrificing things/urself bc the other person ur with is at a different point in their life (and is unhappy abt it and wants u to be less than urself to make them fell better) but real love is going through life at the same level and in this case competing with each other at the same level. even tho bottom was always better the top never gave up and always wanted to match him and do more which is something he rly needs. bruh idk where tf i was going with this i'm stopping now ew.

that was gold