the_dump_truck's manga / #sheepies(89)

okaaayyyyyyyyyyy i have some unresolved feelings yall for both stories. nape dude- kinda raised some red flags, he a little sus. nobody need to be that creepy about a fetish. like dude read the room. you don’t have to be creepy all the time. as for the second story. it was pretty good up until the last chapter. liikkkeee i understand that they were going for a realistic approach. but i don’t care. i want true love and shit not this like uhh mmm ehhh j don’t wanna kiss you bs. maybe they adapt more later on. but i won’t really we there for that so it’s irrelevant. but yeah it was good but also meh at the same time yknow. somewhere between waffle and four star. 6.20.21

UGHH I NEED MORE. I NEEEEEDDDD MOOORRREEEE. that was real good but it was waayyyy too short. it lacked intimacy and focused more on the conflict. i guess in some ways you could say that’s a positive but yknow me, i like my fluff very fluffy. we got a few scenes here and there but like I NEED MORE. but anyway pretty good very good art. 6.24.21

WHAT THE HELL IM LITERALLY SO PISSED. I ACTUALLY WROTE LIKE FRICKEN 6000 PARAGRAPHS AND IT ERASED FUCK YOU. IT MAY OR MAY NOT HAVE BEEN MY FAULT. BUT JO FUCK YOU I JUST NEEDED TO CHECK WHAT FRICKEN KYUJINS NAME WAS. BECAUSE I FUCCKIIINNGGG FORRGGOIOTTT. >>>:( i’m literally fuming what the hell. i am livid. ANYWAY >:( i don’t even remember what i was gonna say whatever. this was pretty good i almost put it into crocs but it was lacking in a couple areas. i need more love moments. now admittedly i haven’t read ALL GROWN UP second ver. but imma get to that right after this. thinking back it actually did have a lot cute moments but like i wanted more because i’m selfish :DD next thing i talked about we’re all the bozos being all like oooo jihyun and chiwoo shoulda ended up together ooo it was all his dads fault blah blah blah. like yall shut up. FIRST OF ALL. HE WAS raped. THATS HORRIBLE. IT WASNT MADE CLEAR IN THE STORY AT FIRST BUT THEN IT WAS CLARIFIED AT THE END YALL. NO, JIHYUN SHOULDNT HAVE SHOWED UP AFTER THAT AT ALL. NO SIREE. literally chiwoo if a mf trooper. he deserves everything in the world x18. he deserves a snail boy. also i barely understand the father comments,, but no. no. although his father was actually shit. we can’t blame all of jihyuns problematicness on him that would just be reckless and ignorant yknow :// but i think to sum it all up this was very good. the story was carefully thought out and it had me rolling around on the bed screaming and yelling for hours. good job back to school. OH BITCH AND THE ART. THE ART WAS SK BUENO OH MY GOD. 6.25.21 bruh i need mooooorrree from you. this was good BUT IT WAS LACKING. maybe i’ve just grown as a human being but i need some more seasoning. i need some more slice of life. i need some more SAUCE. i just need a little more from you. let’s bring it from a 7 to like a 9.5. let’s work it people. give me those details. give me those feels. 10.30.22

wooowww lot of y’all don’t like this and i don’t know why. i thought it was pretty good but i guess i just have bad taste. as long as it makes my heart go dugeun dugeun then i’m good. the first season was definitely better than the second season but that’s just cuz i don’t like eunho that much. but literally minkyu it fucking adorable. i don’t all caaareee if you don’t like the second season but you have to like minkyu. or your dead to me. okay now on my thoughts. i thought it was absolutely hilarious that hyung had a love at first sight. that’s just so sooo depressing for youngji. like i’m so sorry youngji deserved better than hyung and he got it. i would take jiho over eunho any day. but anyway it was just so fast. like youngji had been pining for him for years and boom he just falls in love in like a split second. but yeah that was the main thing. oh yea oh yea one more thing. i like this secrets concept. i think it was an interesting and unique concept to base it on. i think that’s what saved it from being literally any other bl. SORRY LAST THING. i was gonna end it on a good note but i’m gonna shit on it one last time. i wish there were side stories. sometimes i think side stories are very unnecessary but if you’re gonna end it so anti climacticly, you gotta give me some side stories. i think that if i read it as it was being released i would’ve given it a much lower rating. because well, no. okay i think i’m done. 7.04.21-7.07.21

okay yea. that was pretty cute. first couple was cuter but honestly both of them were great. i really like this author and their mild fantasy concepts. i like it when my stories have extra spice to them. anyway keep up the good work author person and thank you 7.07.21-7.08.21

hUh what the hell just happened omg wha- soooo many loose ends. i don’t even know how to communicate what just happened. i don’t believe the author. this isn’t finished. what the fuck. it’s like they just went well, i don’t wanna do this anymore and then threw it in the trash can. this had so much promise so much potential. but no let’s waste it and ruin the art style and the story it to something complicated and really unsatisfying. anyway no s1 was very good but then s2 just like- what the heck?? 1.01.21-7.09.21

that was so fluffy yall. i physically hurt with the butterflies that this gave me. i had to take a second to recover. but as y’all know i love me a good slow burn and this was reeeeaaaalll slow. just how i like it. i would like to make a personal shout out to kisup and his grandma. especially kisup. they’re both real ones. j would like to think that hui has deemed him and his grandma as friends 4 and 5. they really didn’t have to help hui at all and he could’ve just suffered and everything could’ve just gone to shit. but no. they stuck through it. like the cool people they are, they helped out this adorable lost little sprite. but yea that was pretty good close to croc status. like frog status or snake status. i don’t really know where either of those are on the chart. but it’s close to croc. anyway good. read again. 7.09.21 this one really is so cute. huis so innocent yet so wise. he’s the god of feng shuei but he doesn’t understand what sweat is. i think that’s why a was a little sad about him loosing his spirte powers tho. is he still all knowing and wise :o i can’t tell. but i don’t care he’s so cute. 9.11.22

frfhjgffdd dude i dunno what to write. it was good. art was good. story was good. by the ending was underwhelming. the entire story just didn’t really move me very much. a perfect story will have a laughing and crying and giving me butterflies and shit. but while reading this i was just like ://. don’t get me wrong very good, super cute. but it just didn’t have that extra oomph. 7.28.21-7.29.21

literally everyone was pining for someone at one point or another aaaannnddd i think that very relatable. everyone always thinks that they’re on their own. but actually that’s not true. at all. we all experience very similar experiences. we just don’t talk about them. anyway i think asmr as a concept could age been super interesting to play with but the author used it in such a boring way. like IMAGINE ALL KINKY SHIT YOU COULD STIR UP. but it was just used as a plot device to make the main couple meet. which is fine. but just kinda boring yknow. it was still cute tho. i felt bad for the one guy who didn’t end up with love. horrible timing my man. 8.09.21-8.11.21

WAHHHHHH THAT WAS SO CUTE ;——; what’s the age difference between these two. imma assume like a lil less than 10 years but i dunno bub. i want more. i need more. WE DIDNT EVEN GET TO SEE THEM IN LOVE IT WAS SO SHORT TF?? my imagination ain’t shit so i dunno what i’m gonna do man. 9.11.21