A S H Y's manga / #Interesting(83)

Awwh, so sweet~! The story is so smooth going, LITERARY no angst on this one!! Obviously, manga plotlines, unlike manhwas UwU The art is beautiful as well! Ending? Very satisfying

The position is good- definitely my teaU-U mc is uke. Either way, the pROblEm is that everything moves way too fast i mean, if it was one shot, then its alright but one shot shouldn't contain too much climax otherwise it'll look dramatic and cliche... That's why I'd appreciate it if there were more chapters ^^ Since the art is good as well >< But yeah, too much is happening in two chapters... Should've had gapes... But overall is good that aside :) not so recommended though tbh^^" like if you're not a tolerable person yknow?

omg rereading this the second time now, its too fucking good TT the emotions delivery is soo- sighs, i love this

Oh my lord — They're so cuteeee!!!

A little bit plain and predictable plots so far... But I guess it's okay

So it seems that the story lacks w the dynamics flowing. While it is good and all, but the pace is not stable at all. One chapter everything is sailing and flowing smoothly naturally. The first chapter on the other hand was moving so fast as well, the mangaka should've written it in a prologue way. If mangaka intended the first chapter to be a big plot twist or something... Then I gotta say that that's just not it dear mangaka. Other than that, manuscripts writing aka character designs as well. Mangaka needed to do better to differentiate one character from another — SERIOUSLY they all look so similar which is confusing at times. But because it's not that bad w the character designs, I decided to keep its star aka pass point anyway. I don't think I'd recommend this story to others that much... Because it contains adultxteen relationship and stepbrothers incest relationship. Please, if your brain is still normal and healthy, leave the room for your own sake