noah's manga / #1. Terrible/Appalling(106)

50. One of the dumbest FL I have ever read. Firstly, she is a grown woman. She knew the plot of the novel and is twice Rosalia’s character’s age if you count her past life. There is no reason for her to be this naive. She has no character trait other than “Ein is a child! He needs a mother’s love.” and is literally blind. The ML also sucks. It’s not that I’m going after him because he lied, he’s a criminal, lying is the least of his crimes. It’s the development with the FL. It’s so forced and makes no sense? I found it rushed. There is also huge plot holes and most of the conflicts are so useless. Like the fact Rosalia was originally abusive but no one was suspicious of her after she turned loving. And instead they all love her now?

On one hand, it’s nice to see Alpha x Alpha and not the usual sexist stuff. But on the other hand, this manga has a rape scene with the brother! And the seme is manipulative and doesn’t ask for consent at all. Not romance at all, nothing hot about rape and manipulation.

31.5 Bad art, worse characters, and even worse plot. This is just sexist and dumb in 80 different ways

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44. FL is a new level of dumb. The whole story is pretty dumb though. It doesn’t get better.

Contains cheating that just gets brushed over, pretty nasty.

Only two chapters in but the secondhand embarrassment is so real. I hate how they’re portraying S/M to be this quirky thing, like the FL and ML are both not assaulting people. It’s so cringe and gross that it’s a challenge to read through this with a straight face. Someone teach mangakas some lessons on consent.