noah's manga / #2. Not Good(1389)

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45. The pacing is a little too fast. Like there wasn’t a proper reason for the MC to gain both of their favors so quickly. I liked her attitude at first because it wasn’t bland. But after a while it gets really boring. She is annoying to watch. Personally I like Lili more because her personality is stronger, but I’m just glad she is in the story as a supporting character. The art is really clean and pretty. But overall story is bland, kind of fast paced and the only reason to like the characters is their looks. The author tried to make them likable by incorporating philosophy and making it hurt/comfort but it’s so boring that even that couldn’t save it. I might read it after it’s finished if I have the will power.

18. Too many plot holes. The story isn’t bad, pacing is kind of funky. I think it’s going a bit too fast because the characters were very briefly introduced. The art is good; the hues are suiting and the shading is nice too. The only flaw is sometimes the postures and faces seem awkward and displaced. I understand the logic but there isn’t much to like about the female lead who is just bland.

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62. It’s decent but I don’t like it. It’s incest and there are a lot of plot holes. The relationship feels forced and the time skips don’t make much sense. She didn’t make proper use of her second time but more so took a long time just adjust. It’s 62 and now she’s thinking about her influence? Overall MC is boring and annoying but so is the ML. Cabel and Enrich or whatever their names are the only decent characters because they had proper developments but I wish she actually made changes. Overall it felt boring.

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48. It’s bad. The art is yellow and crappy, the faces are off and fits are ugly. Predictable plot in turtle pace. Bad overall, feels like a waste of time to continue reading. There are way better manhwas out there.

69. It drags on and I can’t find myself liking the FL. She is young and cute but that’s it.