noah's manga / #One-Shot!(87)

Could be funny

It’s better if this isn’t serialized. It’s looking like ML is gonna like her bc she’s not like the other girls and the way she’s been acting to deviate from the original story line is pretty childish. It’s not looking like this gonna be too entertaining or funny to read.

I love the art and the set up was pretty cute. I don’t like MC being really delulu and indecisive + the fact there was a crazy ex out of nowhere and MC couldn’t say no for some reason? Not good. But I like the other character. She’s more interesting than MC. This probably needed smut to bridge the gap bc I can’t see them falling in love that quick.