Frosche79's manga / #Manly uke(41)

Too short!!

It's too dang short to enjoy

I don't even know how to rate this. It's too lewd. Buh bye

Okay enough. I don't like this. Not one bit. NO. I literally skipped over everything else other than the serious scenes. The smex scenes don't cut it for me if their relationship is this toxic. The Seme's toxic. He's a spoiled little brat who could get whatever he wanted and even destroy the Uke as long as he gets him. He's deranged and I don't love that the story just ended like that. Like, what the hell. The Uke is suffocating from this family and this relationship, I'm all for it if he runs away and hides or kills himself, because even I don't wanna be involved with this Seme dude.

Okay, the art is fab. The character designs are mouthwatering too. Never expected a guideverse with reverse sex positions. Guides in this story are buff and apparently tops the Espers. So unique but interesting. The smex scenes are muah and I really wanted more. The problem is I hated the Seme. A red flag psychopath who never learned that how to make the Uke fall for him the right way. What he did is unforgivable and still should be punished, but am I also brainwashed that I was also willing to forgive him at the end? Dang, it was a short story. It wasn't enough for a plot this heavy.

.... Why does every good story have to be THIS SHORT???!!!!! It was good. The concept was interesting. And the art was muah . It has potential for a longer and deeper story but alas, it only has 6 chapters. Give me a break

Concept is good. Art is good, except for the Seme. His personality aside, his looks really creep me out. He looks and acts like a seme but wears and acts like an uke at the same time. It's weird because he's so tall and lanky, yet at times he looks like he's buff, like when he wore a tux. It's just so unbalanced. Dear artist, if you want a buff and tall Seme or a small and thin Uke, just pick one! Don't make a mix of both, he honestly looks like a hybrid! Also, I didn't enjoy reading it because of how unhealthy the Seme's love for the Uke is. I even skipped the smex scenes because I was so disturbed by their relationship. Granted, there's a reason why he doesn't want the Uke to go back as an active esper, but that doesn't justify him manipulating the organization to keep him in the desk, gaslight him into thinking he's worthless, and keep his body in that state for 11 years. ELEVEN YEARS! Uke had to endure the ankle pain for over a decade and adding the stress, discrimination, and insecurities, it's just not healthy. The best and normal thing he should've done is to talk to the Uke about his concerns and how afraid he was that Uke's gonna die. At least then, the Uke would still have the opportunity to make the decision himself instead of letting the Seme decide for him. Like, this is peak toxicity if I haven't seen one. It's because he kept this up for 11 years. Not a mere 1 or 5, but over a decade of lying and gaslighting. It made me sick to the stomach. That's eleven years he's never gonna get back again. The Uke is weird too because he lets this happen! It's also partly his fault that the Seme's obsessed with him. He let this happen and let himself be fooled all because he's a slave to the kid's looks. Pathetic. If I were him and I find out that he's been manipulating everything around me, I'd be so creeped and disgusted I wouldn't be able to trust him again. That's what a normal person would feel. But this one's a whole other level of an enabler. He let things slide as if 11 years of ridicule, stress, and lying is just a childish prank. I'd be so suffocated I won't be able to stay anywhere near that creep ever again. I don't know about other people, but this isn't healthy. Don't blind yourself and think that this is a sweet and romantic story just because of the art and the ending. It's not, honey. Don't be manipulated into thinking this story is normal.

I love the violence here. The art is good. Character designs, good. The concept is great and the storyline is a little messy, but it's good enough for a short story. Can you believe it's the 4th story I've read in 2 hours? That's how much I've been craving these short but beautiful stories. Anyway, another short one. Twas fun while it lasted. Could've had more side stories though. Some authors are just so stingy.