Frosche79's manga / #Omegaverse(226)

If I have to be honest, it wasn't that good. The plot and concept is interesting, especially for me who likes these kinda things, but it just really pissed me off that the MC still ended up with the guy who imprisoned and used him as his baby mama. The art was okay, the Seme's body looked really hot but sometimes the way they drew people looked a little awkward to me. Especially the kid. Her head would either be too big or her arms were too short, scared the frick out of me when I found out she was only 3. Looked at least like a 5. Also, I do not approve of the gentle parenting. She keeps throwing a tantrum when they say no and they enable her. I ain't letting it go just because it's a yaoi. It's also because she's not cute for me, at all. Anyways, the story had a lot of plotholes for me. I know the idea was good, but the delivery was anything but. It's a little too unrealistic to let go of. Especially the part where the Uke ran off and went against some elite people good at fighting and handling things. A grenade? Are you fricking kidding me? I don't think anyone was supposed to have access to buying that. Also, he bought those things with the Seme's card. Wasn't he supposed to get any notifications for buying stuff like that? Like, to confirm if his card wasn't stolen or anything. Anyways, all of it sucks. There was a reason why I dropped this story before and I already had a guess while reading the first few chapters again. Not gonna be reading this again, I'mma leave this comment as a private note to remind myself why I didn't like this story and why I shouldn't be re-reading it.

The story's crap. Can't say anything about the art since I don't want to insult someone's hard work but the story is literal crap. A mountain of crap with 37 chapters. It's ongoing still but I don't like the characters so this earns a negative in my ratings. I mean, who the hell makes a puppy and herbivore like Seme, a cheater!? Those two characteristics don't match as far as I'm concerned. I would've wanted the shitty seme to be a trashy and psychopathic cheater over a dog-like innocent cheater. This story shattered my expectations in fluffy yaois seriously.

The art is gorgeous, the characters are HOT, and their cute and unique love story where the Uke was a rich badass and the Seme a poor but dominant hotass, like I loved it. The only problem I see here, don't take this the wrong way, is that if you look beyond these--the story is plain simple and a bit frustrating. I've read and watched a lot of stories where the richer one between the couple is capable enough to overwhelm the enemy. The parts where the Uke and his gang feel helpless when it comes to dealing with his billionaire bastard Ex pisses me off. Like, you work in an illegal industry, dude. Where you can do and get anything you want but then you can't even take care of a spoiled asshole. You're in a Mafia for Pete's sake! Use your power to overwhelm that spoiled chaebol. Anyways, that's about it. I just thought that since he's the head of a Mafia or gang whatever, he should be stronger than that guy but then it all ends up to being an alpha and omega huh. Love the story and other than that problem I have, everything is top-notch! It's obvious that the author is still new to this kind of genre but they've got potential.