Frosche79's manga / #guideverse(13)

Fricking thing made me cry It was a wholesome story. Short and therefore a lot of plotholes, but it was wholesome nonetheless. I really loved the concept. The romance was fast in general, but it was alright considering how short the story was. I also loved how good the characters were. Both the designs and the personality. If it was longer we could've seen more of it, but alas, such is the fate of a short story. If you think I'm holding a grudge because I kept emphasizing the shortness of the story, then you're right. I am upset at how short it was and I always will be when it comes to short stories that are this good. Honestly, it's the short ones that are good. It's basically a thing now.

Urghhh so frustratingggg Both the seme and uke are driving me crazy, crazy in the bad way. They're both foolish and they both keep assuming what the other one thinks without taking their feelings into consideration. Which is why they get in trouble. Anyways, sorry. Not my type and certainly not worth my time. I'm out buhbye.

Too short! It was too short to fall in love with it! It had too much potential for it to end like this. Also, there were a lot of things that were left out, like the Uke's source of trauma, the Seme's background, and even the arc where the Uke started to stand up on his own in the mercenary. Seriously, it was too short and too rushed that it lost a lot of its charm. I really liked the concept too. Common and simple, yet still good. The art and character designs were flawless, especially the smex scenes. They were scrumptious . The story could've been good had it been longer and deeper. Urghhh. I'm sick of these short stories now