Frosche79's manga / #josei(24)

I genuinely didn't like the story. The only thing I I think is okay here is the art. Especially with the characters. I personally love the other guy, the second male lead here, with the art and character and all. The storyline is bad, the pacing itself is okay, but the main characters I personally don't like. Like, what the hell are they doing sleeping together when they should be focused more on running away and surviving. Also, what is up with the FL? Why does she not wear any bra. That's the most concerning part for me. I get that it's josei but, come on. You made it more in line with drama, at least make the character more comfortable in a way that reality is not that far off. I can't imagine wearing nothing on top and having these tribemen ogling me and then jumping from tree to tree with my boobs just swinging around. Also, the reason why I lasted so long reading into the story is because I was curious about the thing they called their god here. And the more I read, the less I understand. The entity's not a god, it's easier to say that it's a demon instead. And I didn't like that the story reached over 90 chapters with more and more problems, come with less and less solutions. Hated that. So I'm gonna go. I'll probably look back on this but won't finish it because of this feedback coz honestly, I tried. I really tried and it didn't work out for me.

It's a good plot It's the first time that I've encountered a story like this and it's very bizarre and interesting to me. I like the unique plot. It would've been a lot more popular had the art been more visually appealing. The art is, frankly, too simple and it makes most of the characters look like children so at times I can't take it seriously. There are a lot of plot holes as well and things that don't make sense, but all in all, it's a decent story. FL had 3 husbands, the first one was assassinated, the second one disappeared with their child, and the third one didn't have a good relationship with her, she gravely misunderstood him because of lack of communication. All of them, she was sold to by her assh*le of a father. It's frustrating that the FL won't listen to ML (not really sure if he is), the 3rd husband, whenever he tries to reach out to her. And honestly, I see her as a fool affected by the past because she lets it affect her whenever she encounters them in the present. However, if I was in her shoes, if I was the one who went through all of that, I will probably do the same. She was greatly hurt by her past that she denies their existence in her new present. Because she's afraid. She doesn't want to be hurt anymore so I get that. I can't empathize but I do sympathize with her. By the way, I really, really, REALLY hate her father here. I hate him the most of the trashy fathers I've seen so far, and that's saying a LOT. He neglected the FL, abused the wife (her mom), cheated on them, let other people abuse them, clearly showed favorites between his daughters, sold her not just once or twice, but THRICE! Three men! I really hate this character. Like, how in the world do you sleep at night treating your daughter like some kind of doll to be passed on to different men! He also abandoned her, left her AND her stillborn child, HIS GRANDCHILD, to rot in prison! He didn't help her, he didn't even tell her husband about it because he wanted his other daughter to be the kaiserin and take her place on the throne. How sick can you be! How much of a trash can you be, he doesn't even deserve to be a father. And the gall! How dare he try to make up for it in her next life! He's despicable, if I were her I would strip him of everything he owns. Torture his favorite kids in front of him and have him watch them die. I'll torture him for months on end and then I'll leave him to die. That's how much of an evil person he is, enough to make me imagine doing all of than to him. In any case, this was good in terms of the level of uniqueness of the plot. Other than that I can't say anything good about it. Don't know if I should recommend it or not, but I won't stop reading it because I'm already too far in to back out now.

Second ML's got social issues At this point, it's not right to call him a male lead even as the second one. He's just the Ex-husband here as the FL does not have any plans to get together with him. He's a freaking sociopath. Only having in his mind that his wife is a strong dignified woman and that she's also an angel, like, how the hell does he know that with the ten seconds he met her at the academy?! I've read someone with this kind of personality before, where the ML is freaking delusional that when the FL acts in a completely different way than they imagined, they abused her. Not physically, but damn, mentally and emotionally. That's not normal, man. You're just delusional, having this image of your wife by your own delusions, you never even tried to get to know them! You just assumed they're that kind of person! If you ask me, that's called arrogance. Concluding a person's life just by your first impression of them, how f*cking arrogant. Keep this up and they won't be happy, you won't be happy. That goes the same to the other story I mentioned. The FL divorced them, like this guy. Social issues my ass, at this point you just have to kill yourself, otherwise I'd kill you myself.