Frosche79's manga / #want more!!!(1068)

What!???? Is that it??!!! Wait. Really!???? NOOOOOOOO This has so much potential

Okay, it was fun for a while, but I got sick of them all at the end that I dreaded more chapters. The semes are all bastards in heat, never really apologized to the Uke and did everything they liked. Fr, there were a lot of rapes. Didn't see it? The story is basically covered in it. Also, it's not romance, none of this is romantic at all. Who the heck added that romance tag!? They should've put rape, sexual assault, and psychological. I mean, I was literally overwhelmed as I read through it because I never expected how toxic the characters were. There's the sly psychopath Shinje (I hated him the most because his kind pisses me off so much), the silent uptight guy who is actually a pervert and a hypocrite Taein, the guy with anger issues and the blaming type Chan (tbh, he's the usual type of seme you'd see in regret filled stories), then there's the I'll-show-you-how-I-like-you-but-you're -really-just-a-toy pervert Heesu, yeah. They're all a bunch of bastards who anyone should never deal with. The only saving grace I really liked here is the art. The character designs were fantastic and the smex scenes are so muah. To be for real, the plot isn't that bad, it just didn't live up to the hype as it progressed. Yeah, that's all for me. Never gonna read this again. It's something I never really enjoyed. Maybe it's not for me.

Why'd you end it just like that? JUST. LIKE. THAT!???? I loved it and the art, the character designs, the smex scenes, I LOVED IT. You could've made some side stories at least. Just to let us know how they coped with everything

Definitely Shounen Ai. Not worth it if there are no smex scenes

Okay, the art is fab. The character designs are mouthwatering too. Never expected a guideverse with reverse sex positions. Guides in this story are buff and apparently tops the Espers. So unique but interesting. The smex scenes are muah and I really wanted more. The problem is I hated the Seme. A red flag psychopath who never learned that how to make the Uke fall for him the right way. What he did is unforgivable and still should be punished, but am I also brainwashed that I was also willing to forgive him at the end? Dang, it was a short story. It wasn't enough for a plot this heavy.

.... Why does every good story have to be THIS SHORT???!!!!! It was good. The concept was interesting. And the art was muah . It has potential for a longer and deeper story but alas, it only has 6 chapters. Give me a break

Fricking thing made me cry It was a wholesome story. Short and therefore a lot of plotholes, but it was wholesome nonetheless. I really loved the concept. The romance was fast in general, but it was alright considering how short the story was. I also loved how good the characters were. Both the designs and the personality. If it was longer we could've seen more of it, but alas, such is the fate of a short story. If you think I'm holding a grudge because I kept emphasizing the shortness of the story, then you're right. I am upset at how short it was and I always will be when it comes to short stories that are this good. Honestly, it's the short ones that are good. It's basically a thing now.

Too short! It was too short to fall in love with it! It had too much potential for it to end like this. Also, there were a lot of things that were left out, like the Uke's source of trauma, the Seme's background, and even the arc where the Uke started to stand up on his own in the mercenary. Seriously, it was too short and too rushed that it lost a lot of its charm. I really liked the concept too. Common and simple, yet still good. The art and character designs were flawless, especially the smex scenes. They were scrumptious . The story could've been good had it been longer and deeper. Urghhh. I'm sick of these short stories now