mangasaeki's manga / #Smut(141)

Ok, I fucking hated this. I'm sorry, but I hate the dynamic. The uke is just missing something in his personality. Maybe a brain? idk. I hateeeeeee the seme. He's rapey af, annoying and just gross overall. The translation gets spotty in places and it make it difficult to actually understand what it being said between the characters at times which is a mild annoyance, but it pales in comparison to how stupid this plot it. The art is stunning but I can't get past how shitty the seme is. The scene where the seme puts ointment on the uke is by far the cringiest fucking thing I've read in a while. He was sexually assaulted and you fuck him anyway like a pervert? Ew. Not only that, but he constantly belittles, shames and chides the uke for no fucking reason, whatsoever. Also, I'm not sure if it's the spotty translation but the erotica that he writes is actually written like trash. On top of all of this, he forces uke into sex pretty much all of the time, too... just why? I'm not sure why there's a plot at all, this would've been fine as just yaoi, nothing more, but the mangaka or editor, for whatever reason, felt this needed more than it did. I'm disappointed to say the least. Sorry to anyone if they liked it, I just plainly did not :/

The last story really could've been flushed out into something full-fledged, damn.

I seriously hated the actual predator oneshot. Hella uncomf, but the rest was okay. I didn't really like the scummy rental guy either... Read with caution

I really don't go for teacherxstudent, but this plot (second story) was done rather tastefully and the age gap wasn't too big. Still slightly uncomf, but cute either way. Of course, the rest of it was entertaining and fun to read for mostly smut.

I genuinely liked this plot. The characters were complex and interesting. The side characters were also well-blended into the plot as well, their separate development wasn't harsh on the reader. Very fluffy, considering all of the drama, imo. Very cute read.