mangasaeki's manga / #Smut(141)

It was rather chaotic at times and so some of the story was a little jumbled but other than that, it was a good read. I really enjoyed the unique story.

Okay the story would've been great if it wasn't delusional incest.

UGH, I WISH THERE WAS MORE TO THIS STORY. Even though I've seen these character's personalities before, something about their dynamic and synergy is just *chef's kiss*. I ADORE the art. It's fucking stunning. I NEED MOREEEEEE ;A; Fantastic read.

The story turned out to be much more mature than I was initially expecting, which was a nice surprise. At first, I really disliked Hagiwara's personality as he was making egregious assumptions without consulting Yuto at all, but as the story developed, he came to terms with what he had been doing and even admitted to it, so all was forgiven. The character's personalities are however, pretty run-of-the-mill, if you know what I mean. Still a decent read nonetheless, though.

What a really interesting and thought-provoking story. Mangaka leaves you confused almost until the end and honestly, the story-telling was really well done. The concept is unlike anything I've ever read although I am semi-versed with mpd. It also had kind of a Bonnie and Clyde element to it as well which made it even more interesting. Obviously, their actions shouldn't be condoned in normal society but in BL world, Yuki's father totally had it coming to him. Great read, I'm not too sure why the rating isn't higher. Although that may be due to the fact that in the first half of the manga, there is clearly something wrong with Yuuta and Tomohisa talks in such a way that makes it seem like he's taking advantage of him (and he is but also not really because it's complicated.) Either way, very engaging and provocative! Highly recommend.

Honestly, the story was shit. There really wasn't much 'story' to begin with, actually. Not that yaoi is really meant to have a story based on definition alone but wow... I mean, this was clearly meant to be a story and well, it was just shit. The character's weren't deep. Most of the time they sucked, especially Ono and Yuta. Like, even though it's coherent enough that it's tolerable, the climaxes or rather, the events that the characters are supposed to deal with are poorly written and sloppily dealt with. Kazuma is sexually assaulted many times, but because old yaoi troupes die hard, he doesn't see an issue with that. In fact, he has literally no back bone at all. Idk man, if you're looking for JUST smut, this is the manga for you, otherwise, don't waste your time. :/ This really disappointed me as I was hoping for a well developed and thoroughly fleshed out story given the amount of chapters it has but nope.. Better luck next time, I guess.

I actually really liked this plot! It was refreshing in a lot of ways. The characters were so sweet in the end. Great read.

Well, that was cute. XD

This was actually very cute. The uke is a wild card but entertaining no less. Good read.