pyschosimp's manga / #want more!!!(10)

Story grew on me despite the really stupid logic that he's able to forgive him for the sexual assault and physical assault and murder attempt?!? purely BC of Caesars trauma like bro in a normal relationship U don't fear for Ur life when Ur lover gets angry edit: idec they were rly cute towards the end, maybe some trauma can be understood and forgiven (?) for..

Such an abrupt ending, it wasn't even amazing but it had potential to finish off on such a better note to the relationship.

I'VE NEVER FELT SO STAISFIED READING A CHAPTER WHEN IF INSIHED CHAP 94 UGH yh the tension in this story ugh the build up and the yh abs and beautiful body art im just such a sucker for good art and body proportions and the fucking hip muscles ughhh... anyways my only criticism is i really liked hansoo like omg when i realised the kim dude was eyeing him up i literally got scared, but anyways i wish hansoohad a more realistic adult-like maturity about him. yh my geenral criticism is i alw hate childish logic so whenever yoon jay throws those phrases around like 'you're mine' 'should i rly have to mind you when it's you own mistake you got hurt' 'yh i gave myself the right to throw all your shit out' like if this was a real man ik he'd get slapped like wtaf. anyways tbh that's a criticism for all bl out there that includes lins like that tbh, so honeslty technically no criticsm for this story specifically!!! oh wait actually tbh the end with evth just happening at the same time after he wakes up from his coma was a bit rushed, but yh no i rly liked this story, i like the build up and the whole arc where he realises he's found a reason to live and i feel like the whole Memory movie plot is supposed to mimic Yoohan's own life, wish i understood the metaphor better but anways this review is allover the place but basically 5/5 absolute best read for a while no srs complaints apart from i need to see yoohan spent on the bed more (refer to chap 80 )

simple short and cute read, had potential to be expanded to be at least 30 chaps and still be rly good tbh

i loved these two, i want this typa love

one of my less favourable 5 star reads, but it was still like so cute and i loved the whole redemption of their love like awww, uhmm also their smut was rly good too

eread: hm i reread this bc i was confused why i rated this 4 stars the first time and i was still confused why i hadn't rated it 5 stars till i finished, i think I'm being quite hard on this story bc it def deserves 5 stars but a strong critique i have of this is the ending, it felt too sappy to me compared to the earlier dialogues, it almost felt like it became a diff genre for me in that sense, I also wished they addressed the age gap more because professor x teacher can always go wrong there. I am like nit picking tho bc overall ugh this was a rly good read and tbh i'm not changing the rating bc i wanna stay honest to my original reaction when i first read this a year ago. You can definitely agrue the transition from the whole drama -> romance was there, there was a transition, but it almost felt unnatural, the way he just accepted the younger brother, I feel like showing more guilt there due to age gap + him being his ex's brother would have done well, brother complex also almost dissipated too much, considering he lived his childhood and grew up w those ideas I would have wanted it to be more prevalent even if they were in a relationship, the jealousy at the end wasn't any different to jealousy that would have been form a possessive lover, I wanted his brother complex to show up more simply bc it's not relaisitc for his mindset to just change so quickly, it'd take healing

im read this on the official webtoon site, i can't stand reading w blurry quality once ive read the official releases, i'd rather be behind side note: so glad we got rid of the gibaek arc and she saw sense in getting rid of him, is miss his puppy apperance tho, shame he didn't live up to his outward appearance