Lizabe11_Eg's manga / #Ｏ(≧∇≦)Ｏ(158)

I liked it a lot, but I do think it was a little short and rushed. I would have liked it a little more if there was more of a steady flow, instead of this fast paced one. I don’t mind short stories usually, if it’s done properly that is, (ouch, that sounded mean) although I do always end up wanting more lol. But this I felt was just rushed. (Like what usually happens if a story has an abrupt ending) The first two chapters were good pacing, but then the pacing suddenly sped up out of the blue, and in return it seemed really rushed, and it felt unfinished. Although these are just my opinions, and you can speak for yourself and have different opinions.

AHHHHHHH I REALLY REALLY ENDED UP LIKING THE SECOND COUPLE SO MUCHHHHH I LOVE DOSHIK AND YOSEF SAQASKSKAIWQOOQMSMSSAKAOAA I WAS SO HAPPY AT CH 87 WHEN YOSEF WAS SO HAPPY MY HEARTTTTTT I FUCING LOVE DOSHIK SO MUCH!!!! HIS ENERGY HIS CONFIDENCE AND HIS (maybe a little too much) HONESTY I ended up loving all the characters sm omg ｡ﾟ(ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ｡ if anything ruins their happiness now, imma throw a building.

Nah but this shit made me cry actual tears wtf man

just reread the whole thing and it was a rollercoaster. It was a bit rushed in some places and dragged out too much in others, but all in all, it wasn’t bad