Please Do Not Open the Beast’s Cage At Will
To make good looking characters and even give them an interesting aura. It is repeatetive, I got bore of both semes so quick since their lines are always the same Ugh it's one cliché after another one.. I got my hopes up cause the plot sounded fine, melancholic, but this is low key trashy God, I'm still reading cause I want a insignificant lecture but eat so much bananas so he could get sick ¿¿?? Absurd This had so much potential to be a drama, full of nostalgia with a strong memory of a love and the story started like that but it got bad so quickly. At the end the ex lover was pointless and I'm pretty sure it would not get a real ending. If the love they had was that big, the uke would have been more tempted, he would accept some advances even if he regretted it later. The fcking car crash???? Totally unneeded. Now in the next ch it's revealed that it was an hallucination, even more unneeded. Just make him desperate while talking, put the dead wish in his actions not in his mind. The voice message??? Why being so rude? I know author tried to made the ex a bad guy but he's truly not, so you don't need to torture him They cry so muucchhh, it's annoying LAST CH WAS REAL BULLSHIT WTFF. If you ask me why did I read it all the way to the end, I don't even know cause it was no good at all. I liked the original idea but it was not here. The only kinda good things I have to say bout this story is how handsome the uke and the ex were and that they started with some interesting vibes, but that last one was wasted as the ch went
A Senpai