tepho_snoopy's manga / #Experimenting(BL)(381)

This was good... this could have been longer with more drama and sex scenes since the characters were really fleshed out Has sequel

WTF!?!?!? I have so much to say!!! 1st of...there is no "I wish this was longer" crap. This should have been longer (period)... the story came out a little better than mediocre because the author tried to have a story with a fucked up and twisted character and a severely emotionally damaged and broken character but failed to take us deep into their psyche/emotions/thoughts/experiences... it was like she gave us a taste and then nothing. Someone back me up... has anyone read something like this and physically felt the pain, the thrill and the anxiety that the characters go through? Like a said; a taste... whenever the author started to show us this... they suddenly interrupted the feeling and moved on with the plot... which leads me to... #2 how did play up the final bed scene and not give it to us full swing? I mean these are some serious messed up character... the bed scene should have been way hotter

This was great! I just wished I could've seen everyone reaction to the couple... but that's just cuz I think it would he hilarious Btw this has a spin-off

I need a conclusion!!!! Ch 1 not here... I did finish this... I just want more to see if the revenge was completed or maybe the guys comes back for more (this is my wish)

WTF!?!?!? I left the longest review here and now it's gone. I'm sorry I really couldn't get behind this... everything was there but it didn't work together The art was there Story... there Character design... there Character positions... NO... just no So I've read stories like this before were I was surprised by the reversed positions of the couple and I didn't mind them because the author always did something for me to accept them in their new roles... like draw their expressions differently.... or change their personalities... or even have the plot destroy any possibility of the roles being in reverse... I was able to slightly do it with the first couple because Nao's expressions were cute (even though his design always remained as a cool top) and Haru became pushy (his expressions were still cute but I've read stories with cute tops so it was ok). But I couldn't do it with the second couple. Jin was just drawn blushing but that didn't make him cute (seeing my man Jin done like that left a horrible aftertaste... he was more of a mature aloof top) and Nachi can honestly be a pushy and horny top or bottom. I thought they were going to switch back for round two but... nothing. Apparently there is a sequel for each couple.

Wow... this was just not it. I usually like this mangaka's sexy scenes but everything up the the first bed scene was so lacking... (I love the extra loving bed scene in the extra chapter though) The story was good but it was too detailed and not detailed enough at the same time... like the author went out of their way to make Johan have a hate for humanity but don't elaborate as to why (with like a persuasive story). There is also Heinz... if you're not going to have a separate story for him then there is no need for him to have been developed, spared and then Turned!? And finally... the most annoying... I did not see Micha's change in love from parent to lover... I know you guys want to say that he was just clueless but that's not the case. He is clueless but he never showed attraction or jealousy toward Johan until the bed scene and even then...... I didn't even see the epiphany in his emotions when he turned Johan because I could still see him saving him because he loves his son and doesn't want to be alone

Was good! Could've been longer to shed more light into all the mystery behind all the characters Has 2 spin-offs

Waiting for more

Dude... I would've liked this way more if I hadn't had this nagging thought throughout the story... the seme is too unrealistic... the fact that he wanted his first time to be a certain way and wasn't satisfied with how it actually went kept making me think "dump his ass" There's more like finding someone to love The interrupting family The forced coming out to give seme new family Semes insecurities that constantly derail them Sudden weakness in the uke I just was not overall satisfied with the story