tepho_snoopy's manga / #Experimenting(BL)(382)

Damn it! I thought this was gonna be a favorite and then... SPLAT! Everything was going well and then they suddenly turned cold. There is no explanation whatsoever why Itsuki asked to be friends with no benefits when he could've continued pushing Yohei into "confessing" IF that was his goal (according to who?). Which nothing he does suggests that was his intent since like I was saying not only does he put a stop to the benefits Yohei so obviously craves (as he noticed when he pats his head), Itsuki also breaks the friendship and avoids him completely. HIS ACTIONS MAKE NO SENCE!!! Yohei's make perfect sense. He gets mad being ignored; he revels. He thinks he might be in love; He childly investigates, gets shy and avoids Itsuki. He figures out he's in love; he gets mad the guys he likes won't confess and turns it into a fight. And finally their confession and anticipated bed scene was unsatisfying. I would give this 3 stars but I really liked the beginning

Besides the character design, I didn't really like this. The story seemed too fragmented and didn't seem to run fluidly. In the end it seemed superficial, as if it was just going through the steps of each part of the story until it got to the end. Introduce/meeting/physical closeness/misunderstanding/ flashback/confession/sex. No feeling. They are pretty enough to merit a 3/5 though

This was good but not my cup of tea. (That's why I'll abstain from submitting a star rating but give it an unbiased 7/10). It was untraditional in every way that it could.It was sweet and innocent but since it started with Shinya willing to sleep with anyone I was expecting that sort of mood to continue. I was further let down when Naoto cut his hair. I like my Semes manly. He must look the part or act the part. Their inconsistencies with the traditional roles threw me off and made me think it was a failure on the author but they addressed them in the story so I was grateful for that. I'd recommend to people that are picky about forceful Semes.

Some of what the characters were saying made no sense. Idk if these were error in translation or from the mangaka's part. It made the last chance I gave this manga to redeem itself go down the drain. The art and premise were excellent and really drew me in, but the execution was so poor and superficial that there was no connection between me and the characters' emotions and even between the characters' feelings towards each other. This is important cuz according to the author the reason they continued to meet after the first time even though it went against both or their previous behavior had to be because they already felt something for each other yet I went back to look for clues of this and nothing...

This was so good I wish it didn't have all those inconsistencies so that it would be perfect. I really didn't like Makoto's backstory because it doesn't coincide with his current self living in a white room and also because it was just unnecessary to the plot

Meh

Waaaa! I love this! Please give me more! Omegaverse writer wishes he could be bitten by true love