tepho_snoopy's manga / #OV+PS+UL+SF+PH+EC+MF(282)

This was great but it could've been so much better... First off and very importantly Yaku's "I love you" felt very ungenuien... maybe if we saw his tought process and why he chose to say it... but I still don't think it would work... Second; the chapter waisted on Sano was unnecessary besides letting us know that Yaku got played by a douchebag... why try to make us feel bad for Sano first unless you were going to give him more plot time and give him a spin-off or something... which leads me to... Three: this would have been better if it was longer... now hold on I know we all say this but hear me out... instead of saying I love you in that instant Yaku could have apologized and his guilt lead him to accept being Hino's friend... you would have had more time to now see the relationship from Yaku's perspective and show how he slowly gets pulled in by Hino's cuteness' jealousy scenes as Hino's circle of friends increases, more funny scenes with Hino's protection squad and maybe even a chapter for stupid Sano.

Loved it! Wish to see where it could've gone from here but an open end is good toop

Seriously!? This was great but it could've been perfect if it had more resolute conclusions to all the drama the author brought up... I thought that was the point of the second volume... no outing to Kazunari'z mom... no reproach to Hayato's family... Hayato didn't even come clean to Kazunari about his real emotions...

Very important page missing from chapter 1... Some scenes are so dramatic they stop my heart for no reason... That bitch! (I'm done with the whole "don't hit a woman" shit. Admittedly she deserved it... Just don't hit anybody

Waah this was great! Plot, hot characters plus great sexy scenes

Dude, if you're going to have different rules from a standard omegaverse THEN FUCKING SAY SO!!! Also omegaverse stories usually have an abundance of happy chapters at the end to offset all of the fucked up shit... the fact that they're missing has ruined my final judgment on this manga Apparently there is a sequel with more fluff https://www.cmoa.jp/title/220950/ (18 pages of afterword missing)

I confused this for another like it so I wasn't happy with how it really went... I also didn't like the final breakthrough in Kageyama's feelings was explained properly or cathartic enough... Finally... for the most part I liked Hinata's actions in the story but idk if it's because of the main story or the story I confused this for but I'm not content with the fact that they went to colleges, in the same city and live together...

This was excellent!!! Will become one of my often rereads

Not a threesome...