Hit Me!
I need a conclusion!!!! Ch 1 not here... I did finish this... I just want more to see if the revenge was completed or maybe the guys comes back for more (this is my wish)
Ijiwaru na Tsukai no Netsu ni Oborete
This is great so far... I thought it was complete but... Also the scans are not the best translations are good... I think they're just lacking some proofreading 14 chapters +afterword
Given
I feel something bad coming so I wo t comeback until this is over or when someone lets me know when the storm has passed.
The Omega Takes a Husband
The story and characters were great. I just wish there were more sexy scenes... this author has great sex scenes and for a omegaverse I was expecting more passion... specially after what Makoto said about losing focus...seriously disappointed that not only where these scenes were not draw for us the audience and just told to us but that the couple didn't get to see a glimpse of the depth of their love for each other unlike the side characters
Hitsuji ni Narasete itadakimasu
This was cute (the characters not emotionaly)... and slightly different to what I'm used to... the seme stayed cute all the way to the end... I just wished since the driving force to their relationship was sexual desire that there was more passionate sexy scenes... 13 pages of electronic limited bonus missing
Two in Six Billion
I loved this!!! I love them possessive semes! Even though this had very little sexy scenes the twistedness makes up for it. I just wished the power was explained better
Long Night Sweet Porno
It was tender and wholesome... But.... it didn't pull at my heartstrings. Usually wholesome stories get me emotional but this wasn't the case... maybe it was because art style (character design was great)... it felt incongruent at times... or maybe it was the length... the characters' backgrounds were great and their emotional responses correct but I just didn't connect with their feelings like I usually do... (I'm just pointing this out since this can change in the future depending on my emotional state when I reread this) What I do mind was the sexy scenes... although the author made a point for the chracters to be clingy and emotionaly attached... the author also showed in many ways how they were both pretty promiscuous....and the intimate scenes felt short on the build up expectations... Also I wished Shitara got to meet Asami's friend... maybe even a spin-off for him
My Destined One
Too Shoooooort!!! This was great... I did get sidetracked by my desired for revenge (^▽^*)ゞ.... but the ending came too soon! Now I'm not saying I wanted more (if I could I would give this 9/10)... The art was great The story line was gut wrenching And the chracter design was perfect for each character... I'm looking at you Yamada (I love a best friend with glasses) But it had too little of everything else... Too little intimacy Too little main couple interaction Too little on certain chracters' development Too little on resolutio... And had NO REVENGE! If each of these were expanded on we could of delved deeper into the intensity of vital moments in the story... maybe even some info on the omega that Asshole was talking about and some payback... maybe even more Yamada
Melt at Night