My Guildmate Next Door
Biting the Tiger
main story is 1-60 i liked it :) there are some plot points that just... don't really make a lot of sense and kinda feel like they got pushed aside to produce more fluff, which is all good in my book! i love fluff! some of the writing really does NOT flow smoothly. most of the plot points don't really... resolve in a satisfying way. they "resolve" in that the main couple makes up and goes back to being lovey dovey but it doesn't feel... earned i guess. I still really liked it!!! this is important to state. i just felt like it was a little amateurish. i will say, some parts REALLY read like you're supposed to be reading the sequel/sidestory at the same time? i thought this one came first chronologically but it's all sorta overlapping and it's a little annoying. i dunno if i liked the side characters enough to go out of ym way to read it... this up has the extras but the separate up has better cropping so read that one instead >_> i'll review the extras over there instead of here
Biting the tiger - Side Stories
a separate upload of the extras with better cropping! everything i said about the main story still applies, some of the writing is a bit rough around the edges and the plot exists solely to service fluffy lovey dovey moments, not drama. in regards to the upped age rating on this bad boy. the arts quite good but... i think the author hasn't quite mastered the art of pornography. i just don' find it satisfying from... that perspective. that said it's still a worthwhile read because of how fluffy and sweet everything is.
How To Break Up With Him.
Choose Your Heroes Carefully
He's Been Searched By The God
after reading 50 chapters of this detritus all i have to say is the mc could do better then this piece of shit. straight my ass, all he does is take advantage of the mcs feelings for him and be a completely controlling dick. i hope they at least have a fight were the mc leaves him, at least for a while...he wasted 8 years of his youth on this idiot put him through some pain at least. update for 77. yeah okay. i feel like he suffered appropriately for the circumstances. the mc stood his ground well and all in all it felt earned when they finally got together. i didn't mention this in the original review because it shirmply wasn't relevant but... i do enjoy the writing style of this. it's fun to read, a classic lighthearted kind of silly and unrealistic type of story can be extremely fun. i just felt to sorry for the mc to enjoy it. but... i feel like it panned out pretty well.
Let's Skip the Handshake
o_o girl. thats. the secondhand embarrassment is killing me. why did the grandma curse him like this when he was helping her arrgghhhhh. i dunno if i can read this because the concept (while HILARIOUS) is just... so embarrassing to read. i only read like 60% of the first chapter, i couldn't even look at the rest of it the secondhand humiliation was so strong. the arts SO good though. might juts check in from time to time for sex scenes lmao. i need to actually describe the plot bcs theres no description and i won't remember uhhhh... a guy has been cursed so his hands are really sensitive and he gets sexual pleasure from touching people. is probably whats happening if i had to guess. it may just be the male lead or it may be just anybody, it's only been 1 chap idk lol.
Desharow Merman