Part-Time Partner
75 "I feel like a lot of the dialogue overall could be cut down. Especially all the article jargon. I’m all for a bit of a build up but It’s like the author wants to waste the chapter beating around the bush instead of getting straight to the point." 73 all 20 chapters full of angst angst angst but that rejection just now was chef's kiss put your foot down baby he has to grovel harder to even have a chance to get you back and yes block him call him a stalker cuz he highkey is one that's right you knew bout his lil schemes he aint getting it easy "This ain't no damn chasing arc if this bastard doesn't kneel, cry, beg, and say the wrong shit that makes a person get infuriated. He has to ACTUALLY start learning how to stop acting like an egoistical fuck and say "In my defense...", NO! Deeply reflect and not just the part where Kyuho shouted at you, DEEPLY REFLECT WHAT WENT WRONG IN YOUR RELATIONSHIP and how your actions caused Kyuho confusions. And again, if there are no tears shedded and actual change in character THIS AINT NO DAMN CHASING ARCCCC" 51 "how is this any different from dating" frfr 50 lmaoo "atp yoongun could propose and still be like “yk we’re not dating” and kyuho would believe it" "this is so modern i hate it" 48 i liked how his friend delved into the topic of relationships and how we might have differing viewpoints on what that is but man mc needs to stand up apparently he confesses and gets rejected AGAIN ml will never notice his feelings until a rock comes along that rock being another man 46 just admit u like him gd "I want kyuho, seme can leave, I'll treat kyuho RIGHT" 43 kyuho forgives him too easily "While I’m glad they made up Its not “satisfying” because in the first place Kyuho did nothing wrong, not even defend himself now the ML thinks he is over the issue" 40 girl drop him he's too possessive for a casual relationship "if I was disrespected like that, called "filthy" and "dirty" or any shit like that, for helping a friend.. that will be the end of whatever the fuck we had going on and you'd never see me again!!! if mc raises the white flag first I might have to drop this, because he might as well just be a doormat at that point... It's really frustrating to watch him worry about making up with that asshole... WHY WOULD YOU EVEN WANT TO MAKE UP?!?? no dick is worth losing your self-respect over " 38 i LOVE HOW KYUHO STANDS UP FOR HIMSELF AND HE GETS PISSED OFF AT THE ML'S BEHAVIOR LET'S GAURRRR 37 they're so cute i want to read the spoilers so bad ppl callin ml a bad dude haven't seen it so far besides his personality but we ALLL knew that going in and it's so nice to see a mc truly like sex and not be forced 36 they have SO much chemistry omg WHAT not him picking the grass when there was a dandelion LMAO "we're dating and we're the only ones who don't know" "if this is what friends are nowadays why even bother getting married" "friends with benefits when you are on the premium subscription plan" "ml is longing for true love deep down (think about his speech about relationships as opposed to views of mc) so he is unconsciously caring for mc i think. His subconcsious cares for mc and longs to make him his bf " 35 34 they're actually super compatible in bed and ngl he's a good sex partner willing to learn new things wtf 32 pretending to be a foreigner cuz u suck at games lmaooo 31 honestly that was some good communication from both sides both stated their feelings clearly on what they thought the definition of dating was and ngl i agree with the ml "the person who i thought was more superficial is the one who's actually thoughtful...." 26 they needa communicate kyuho is weak to the moves 24 yesss omg yesss "i love the enemies to lovers trope so much and this story serves that in such a satisfying way also i like how the smut isn't too elaborate lmaooo.... i dgaf about it, i love the push and pull more" "LMAOO he's loosing the idgaf war so baad" "the first uke ever to stand on business" 22 the way he just deleted that asshole's text was sooo refreshing 21 we love mc but agg how this one is gonna go "It bothers the seme so much that uke is so casual with him. lol. I love it." "Our MC is such a great catch, both as a friend, and a partner, he's been nothing but nice to everyone and he was only ever annoying to ML bc ML deserved it, like ML is so egotistical bro thinks the world revolves around him or smth and MC still is nice to him like wow" 20 he's so manipulative 13 enemies to lovers but the spoilers sigh i hate that type of plot "It said, they kept sleeping together (being fuck buddy). I was like (???) Seriously? Isn't this guy so homophobic he even deliberately tarnished uke name because he didn't like him because he is gay. Ok btw, they became fuck buddy. Uke got so confused with seme. So uke confessed his feelings, and seme, ugh no. I don't like you. Let's stop sleeping with each other. Uke then heart broken, start new relationship with someone else. Then seme was like, uh oh no I got jealous. I like uke tho. Please come back. Wtf"
Melting Point
17 i love the yearningggg "Im loving this loser in love" 14 ooo the flirting from both of emm "Love it when they tease each other BWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH" 12 that massage looked good ian rlly got the hots for him mc is so relateable saying like bro i needed space 10 bro is speed wtf 8 "He wants the cookie so bad" 7 i love me some enemies to friends good ol yearning my man 3 i love this mc whole man said he was gonna quit his damn job rather than work with this mdf my GOAT but then the mdf made an offer he couldnt refuse and truly he couldnt cuz his brother was soooo cute with him omg "u were always there for me when dad wasnt" AAAAA U CAN HAVE IT ALL BABY BRO
Friend or Faux
31 OHOHOH I LOVE THE MC PERIODDD GET UR COMEUPPANCE AND UR RIGHT HE IS THE ONE THAT IS TRASH "my guy just wants to graduate and start college but hes like a prick magnet. these hoes just wont leave him alone. I can’t imagine this ending in romance. The “ml” is a black flag. When you see the person you “love” suffering or crying or hurt and you don’t care and instead prioritize your own wants that just shows you lack empathy and have no real love. I can’t see any type of redemption." 29 LMAOOOO SOMEONE SAID "GRAB THAT CHAIR AND BEAT HIS ASS!!" AND ANOTHER PERSON COMMENTED SPOILER IT WILL HAPPEN IM DEADDD I LOVE THIS MC AJAAHAAJFAOIDJFAOIFJAODFJ "THIS IS THE KIND OF TOXICITY THAT I CRAVE FOR. LIKE, WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK!??? HELL YESSSS" 28 edit: yup went thru comments to read some spoilers its a case of yessir its true i made a bet but i changed my mind i like u now lololol "Is he an omega why is everyone losing their shit trying to get into his pants??" ooo i love MC SOOO MUCH OMG he confronted his old bully to find out the truth confronted who he thought was a friend and even confronted the dude playing him for months he's so good i do think ml did end up falling for him truly tho novel: https://novelib.com/story/possibility-of-change/pocc-ch-12/ 25 DAMNNNNNN I LIKE A BADDIE WHO FIGHTS BACK DAMNNNNN i thought he was just a doormat for 25 chapters well most of it he really did try to stand up for his friends but ended up getting swayed by the suss ml but he really said LEAVE MY RELATIONSHIPS ALONE in this chapter pushed him back and grabbed his collar and everything LOVE THAT
The Boundary of Delusion