AssassinBeta's manga / #fantasy(220)

Overall great story I’m kinda sad about how it ended I wanted to see more of Ivan and his grandfather or see Hyun meet the family officially ;-; But the story overall really touches upon a lot and I’m grateful for it I guess I just wish there was more of at least some side stories.

10/10 story. The author really beats in how horrible each family member is with no remorse to the point where it gets on your nerves tho

Dropped at chapter 82 might want to pick up again Really liked the story overall but stopped reading for a day and COULD NOT pick it back up Spoilers ahead The start was great interesting and lively, but when the FL makes it more slowburn after the ML confesses and she decides not to accept (tho it’s obvious they’ll get together) I think that’s where it turned wayyyy too slow for me (turned from slowburn :3 to SUPER SLOWBURN =_=). Not to mention they add another serious love interest like...it’s chapter 82 you don’t need to make this even slower when it’s basically the middle of the story and he can’t even compare to the ML for the main character. A fan fav type beat but not a good match. Just seems useless to read since its already obvious they won’t get together and because of reason listed above it also makes reading harder because not only is it that they wouldn’t get together it feels like they shouldn’t get together

New uploads were put up for most of the chapters so the translations are fine now! The pacing is a little slow and the flow was very staggered in the BEGINNING- all the encounters and transitions to the next arc seemed forced and the characters are pretty stereotypical (except for the fox bois we love them). Biggest complaint: FL is SUCH a Mary Sue I literally had to take a break from reading because I was getting too frustrated by her naivety and the author’s need to make her “pure” and “better than” FL has a holier than thou narrative making it just really annoying to read sometime and it feels like a lack of growt and many times makes moments super unrealistic it takes you out of the story with how “pure/good” she is. This whole story has a lot of potential tho, I like the concept and character tropes it just slightly lacks in some important storyboarding aspects and character depth. Update: at chapter 97 shit is getting boring to read the FL is too OP beyond reason might drop soon, don’t even remember how I used to like this story so much in the beginning. The pacing is getting staggered again wondering if the author just isn’t good at story-lining