Umm... don't really have much to say about this one. I didn't like how the MC looked like a man, in every aspect until she took her shirt off. Not to say that I dislike masc women, but I felt like she was too heavy influenced by male design. Story is kind of... not good lol.
There was really no plot, you're kind of just thrown into an already developed story that seemed 2 chapters in on the first page with no info or introduction. I don't know, maybe I'm reaching, but the MC was bland. Like, if you're going to commit to an awkward, anxious, antisocial, socially inept character that the readers are suppose to like as the MC, maybe give us more than her name and the fact that she has a foot fetish. She seemed very "background character" to me, if that makes any sense. It was super hard to feel anything for her other than grossed out by her. She had no character at all. I get that, being a one-shot, pacing for characters is sort of hard, but I feel like if it's unable to be pulled off within your page limit, maybe don't make the character that weird. It was very off-putting to read through. I believe this could have been better with more time and even 3 more chapters, but for a single chapter, I felt nothing but embarrassment while reading this.
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