Zhongli's manga / #boring(205)

SO RUSHED. How is he suddenly in love with him? The in-game scene interactions are more real world than game. Bumping into each other and dropping items? Eating update? Huh? And then you dont show the quests and gameplay? What wasted potentials.

So anti-climactic. The story moved to 2nd act thanks to the side characters, not the mains. Poor storytelling. Tells more than it shows.Fails at drama.

like it's written by a child.

It's like it's written by a pre-teen. Reeks so much of immaturity.