Mama Fujoushi's manga / #Unrequited Love(15)

OMG the last page of chapter 3!!!!! O.O SO cool!! <3 Great story, though it is hard in places. Very good, though. <3

Well, I'm not sure what I expected but it wasn't this. It was very well done, I enjoyed it quite a bit. I liked how the "straight" friend struggled with things, but took the blame and tried to fix things. The brocon stuff was funny and not as over the top as some I've read. I really enjoyed this one. Definite reread. 6.5 ch

Okay, so, the first one... I was annoyed with the seme. I didn't like how he manipulated things. I'm glad the other guy got what he wanted, but I really would have liked to see things go differently. The second story (last chapter as of 5/23) was much cuter. I liked to see the guy lose his cool and actually deal with the other guy's worries.

I liked the first two quite a bit. First (1-2) Is high school classmates who become lovers. Really enjoyed that one. (5/5) Second (3-5.5) is okay but not as good (3/5) with the PE teacher and the former student. I didn't like that the student got ignored and that was left unaddressed. Also while the teacher got better, it still seemed unresolved. Third--yakuza and host irritated me because he finally gets the guy to break down and accept him, then leaves him after all. :/ 3/5 (Total rounded down)

Okay, it was pretty good, but with problems. First... the translations. OMG the translations were horrible. IT took a while to parse what they were supposed to say. I think they took a (bad) Spanish translation, then tried to translate THAT into English, losing SO much along the way. That alone would make me hesitate on the reread. Second, I really think Uichirou got blamed for more than was his fault. True, it was his story, from his PoV and he did some wrong, but Makoto was at fault too, for not talking, not telling him ANYthing. Why is it entirely Uichirou's job to ask about Makoto? Why couldn't Makoto volunteer anything? Also, HE ran out without hearing Uichirou's reply. That's on him, frankly. Sure, Uichirou needed to work on some stuff, but omfg, he wasn't the only one at fault. Lastly, and this may have been a translation issue, but I didn't understand the problem with their eyes meeting. He liked that at first, then... didn't? I didn't get the embarrassment with that. Made no sense and that really caused problems enjoying the story. I love most of the work from this mangaka, but this one comes up short.