The Rain Keeps the Sun
It wasn't bad but... R we gonna ignore ml being a freeloader? He's a good artist, he could at least make an art account with it. Share a part in the rent. It's a oneshot, so a LOT was left unexplored. Like how they met, what happened with ml's exs, why did they drift apart, how did mc fall in love with him, where did ml go to when he said he didn't think he needed to be back anymore, & a lot more I can't remember. This could've been longer, oh, ml could've topped mc back, they could've been a switch, would be nice. But guess those r all what ifs, ima leave it at that.
1LDK Blues
Meh. Should've given him a 3 months test period. He may go back to being comfortable again. Also, wym he only stepped up after she decided to leave him? Took her for granted & all.
Toppuu to Beat
I like mc so VERY much
Delivery Hug Therapy
Therapeutic, LITERALLY. I WANT A HUG DELIVERED BY A HANDSOME FACE TOO! KYFVJUTRFHJ86TFHKKNNN. In all honesty, I love how healthy they r. No drama, no huge misunderstandings, & they actually communicate. Couple goals frfr. If it just had more plot to it, it would be great. But it was only just fluff. Not that that on itself is bad though, but it could've gone with more depth, more backstory, more of their lives etc... It's a 4.5* for me though, I needed the heals. Hb+ Hb+
My Tearful Landlord, Mikuru
Russhhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeedddddddddddd, it had potential, could've given us more about each relationship of the 3, hell, even the main couple could've had more. This strayed from what I thought it was, but seme was a green flag (regardless of how I felt about the love at first sight & the oblivious uke) so I guess it was niceish
As Long As You
It's a bit dry, but it's only 17 pages. Though it wasn't bad, I still think it could've been showed warmer.
Oniisan no koto sukinano?
Boring... but not bad? It's cute as a fluffy-smutty read I guess, but I wasn't feeling like smut exactly. Plus I did want a manly uke, but the seme was way too air-headed for my liking. Though he was right in many occasions, he was still certifiedly pathetic. The uke was too much of a cool guy even at the end, that even after he tried, I still didn't feel the love. Am I making sense?











Ore to Renai Shitemimasenka