cassie3_3's manga / #Interesting(156)

First of all, I'm super disappointed that the mangaka did not maintain the dynamic the story had in the beginning. It was unique, cute and, above all, hilarious. Something like that could have easily become a hit and stretched this story out for much longer, especially knowing that this would eventually become a Yaoi. After all, many want to read more to see it happen -- even more if the story is entertaining and seemingly innocent. Second of all, how fucking rude. Seriously, how much of an asshole can Akira be?! He gets himself off but doesn't get Yuuki off (3rd chapter), even though it's obviously not going to take long. Literally, even if you're [unnecessarily] upset at him for wanting a different career path, if you know you're going to be a petty-ass bitch for no reason, don't even fucking let the sex happen ! ! ! Thirdly, working off the first problem.. Making it so serious, so quickly, completely ruined it. I understand it highlights life, but the huge time jumps made it seem unrealistic. To show life, skipping over the development and how they come to feel the way they do in the present despite being serious about their feelings early on makes their present feelings both confusing and even more ridiculous than it needed to be. If this had been written well, a problem like this would be something I would have expected in a volume six of this manga. If you're planning on focusing solely on their adult life, then emphasize the beginning as a memory with an easy beginning. Not doing so is making it entirely too incomplete. Even though it brings on a few good points, the characters claiming and/ or seeming as if they're so 'in love' with each other is ultimately presented in such a forced light. As I've mentioned before, having not shown their relationship's development from when they were younger to when Yuuki has completed a job for a Drama, makes it unbelievable that Akira is supposedly this 'in love' with him, at thirty-six. Anyways, the best part about this is when Yuuki begins wailing on Akira when they encounter each other again and, later, becoming petty until death -- literally. (But, the worst part about this is how easily Yuuki forgives him after the beat down... :/) Fortunately, the story was a tiny-bit saved in chapter five and six.

Can be summed up in 3 wrds: Boring. Confusing. Impulsive/Gratuitous.