raydenyau's manga / #Yaoi(88)

I really love this doujinshi. I've binge on yaoi manga for weeks now so my feels has slowly gotten a little less intense reading even good mangas now but this is great i love the storyline and the fantstic art. Must read it again the future!

Really beautiful and detailed art. Very good indeed. Storyline is not too bad considering this is a one shot manga

I applaud the storyline is not a typical yaoi material there are twist and i love the new ideas however the plot is not for me but it is good though.

The uke's partner passed away in an accident and he lived in loneliness so he decided to adopt an immortal child to fill the void out of impulse. I felt that 5 chapters is too short for this interesting plot which can be explored further but because of the short chapters, I found that the kid turning into an adult is too rushed for me to really immerse myself into the story and immediately change the angle of a child to an adult. Overall I still like it because the plot is good but just that the mangaka do not have more chapters to offer.

Apart from the art style, i do appreciate the storyline. I'm glad the uke is not a sick villain all the way and he is actually a good person deep down instead of the strong/sly appearance that he gave in the beginning.

I enjoyed reading this manga, short but sweet. I especially like ukes like this; firm and not wishy-washy