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Don't Mix Business with Pleasure!

Ongoing | Hodot | 2022 released
2023-05-07 12:37 marked
Tags: want more!!!

I like this but I feel like the drunk sex didn't really suit this manhwa, or at least how they went about the drunk sex trope for there first time. I would have rather the bottom confront the top about him avoiding and he tells him why. Then they kiss or both have flushed faces, and talk about it over drinks and then do the deed. You still have the same trope in the same outcome but have way more build up. I feel like it's a waste for him to just show up drunk, it takes away from the tops emotions in my opinion. Otherwise, I love how the author handled the top during the drunk sex. What I mean by that is how the top stopped multiple times when he felt the bottom would be uncomfortable or in pain.

Arakure Ojousama Wa MonMon Shiteiru

Ongoing | Kinoshita Yuichi | 2000 released

At first it feels kind of silly and the ero could be a bit much because it's only her. However, I would urge any person who has started to read this to keep going. I genuinely love this and I think it has a great balance of ero/comedy/romance. I don't know if anybody remembers or has watched an anime called "yamada's first time". It was a comedy/romance/ero about a girl trying to lose her virginity essentially. It was really funny but wasn't perverse in a way that would make the audience uncomfortable. This really reminded me of that and I do think the ero is more here but it doesn't take away from the story enough to make it bad. It also becomes like really f****** wholesome and cute later.