Furimuite Yukino-chan!
the progression of yukino liking him back felt quite fast, i would prefer it if after the second confession he said something like "dont say it, i cant say it back. but i dont feel far off from feeling the same" not accepting it but saying he's started to feel something too... or! not say it but a thought bubble saying it then in the festival something triggers him to fall fully. the not replying could be a minor conflict that easily gets solved but shows the sincerity of yukino's feelings. besides this, I enjoyed it a lot ^^ very cute >__
Kami no Fune de Nemuru
not a romance in the sense of genre but there is romance too it. also romance in the sense of the unexpected.
Kataomoi x Kataomoi
too fast, each chapter should be split into multiple chapters. even in the first chapter too much happened, could be a volume in itself. I'd prefer if more time was taken over the events. make them feel natural. it's cute so it's a shame.
Asatte ni Kiss
where did his brain GO, very cute and sweet. some parts made me sad, but that's just because I'm gay and also destined to graduate at 19. it's generally very light hearted, I would like to see more of them but this ending is also fine. because dubcon is so widespread I've adopted the secret technique "pretend it happened differently" as I dont want to let it ruin a good story. but be warned possible readers
Darlin', Iikagen ni Shiya Gare
SWEEEEET !
Riso to Koi