sea_nettle_sapphic's manga / #Student x Student(230)

ch 2

too fast, each chapter should be split into multiple chapters. even in the first chapter too much happened, could be a volume in itself. I'd prefer if more time was taken over the events. make them feel natural. it's cute so it's a shame.

where did his brain GO, very cute and sweet. some parts made me sad, but that's just because I'm gay and also destined to graduate at 19. it's generally very light hearted, I would like to see more of them but this ending is also fine. because dubcon is so widespread I've adopted the secret technique "pretend it happened differently" as I dont want to let it ruin a good story. but be warned possible readers