Tomodachi Ijou no Koto, Shitai.
I know you love him! that's why I'm here ^_^! now pUCKer UUPP!!!!
Even the Introverted Gals Wanna Get Out There!
Furimuite Yukino-chan!
the progression of yukino liking him back felt quite fast, i would prefer it if after the second confession he said something like "dont say it, i cant say it back. but i dont feel far off from feeling the same" not accepting it but saying he's started to feel something too... or! not say it but a thought bubble saying it then in the festival something triggers him to fall fully. the not replying could be a minor conflict that easily gets solved but shows the sincerity of yukino's feelings. besides this, I enjoyed it a lot ^^ very cute >__
Kore de Saigo no Koi ni shitai
what happened halfway through? I liked the first two chaps. why did the personalities and hair lengths change?? read comments, they're different people.... anyway second story didn't engage me in the slightest so I skimmed it but decided not to adjust the rating based on it. I'll pretend it's not there because I don't like it. reread: enjoyed the second story because I wasn't an idiot and caught the character change, cute dynamics all round
Spinach Bouquet
cried my eyes out. lovely jovely. In the beginning, the writing was lacking; it said how 6 months had passed though it was written like 6 WEEKS had passed. there were times when it felt too fast, or there were events that were skipped over, like an in-joke that the author assumed we knew but hadn't been shown to the viewer. The pacing improved really quite quickly, the majority is perfect. I really really love this story and I feel it's truly 5 stars, despite the beginning. Now that I've reached the end, i can look back and enjoy those early chapters, so it's not a massive qualm. what did make me laugh and what I think should be changed (but it doesn't ruin it and it's just because I'm being nitpicky) is donghee looking anywhere between 4-6 but somehow after two years is 13???? what able-bodied 11 year old needs to be accompanied to the bath? needs help washing? and the tiny tiny little apron tangled him up???????? it amuses me... author, have him be eight now. have him grow two years and be eight. please
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