sea_nettle_sapphic's manga / #slice of life(459)

ch 2

I have thoughts that I can't put into words. Erika.

haven't started vol 2 yet but I think ending it on vol 1 would be a sweet and happy ending.

too fast, each chapter should be split into multiple chapters. even in the first chapter too much happened, could be a volume in itself. I'd prefer if more time was taken over the events. make them feel natural. it's cute so it's a shame.

no babe! I love you! I only planned to cheat for 5 days! she'll definitely give up naturally after! I didn't think it relevent to mention as it's only 5 days! please ignore it I love you !

where did his brain GO, very cute and sweet. some parts made me sad, but that's just because I'm gay and also destined to graduate at 19. it's generally very light hearted, I would like to see more of them but this ending is also fine. because dubcon is so widespread I've adopted the secret technique "pretend it happened differently" as I dont want to let it ruin a good story. but be warned possible readers

SWEEEEET !