My Lovely Bunny
Drama free fluffy short story. It's cute, it's plain. It's not bad but it's not good either. It's cute but the lack of any drama or obstacles for the protagonists makes the whole thing a little boring. No obstacles means no resolution, so why would I read it? And it's not like the characters are that deep or interesting (they're pretty much two cute, kind guys who do ok in school and one of them sometimes scowls and the other one always smiles). ... And then there's the last chapter. Why. [The sister is like obsessed by her brother's cuteness and literally watches them do it... Just, why??]
Natsume-kun Wa Nan Demo Shitteru
Generic characters and a straight main character who "discovers" he's gay once the seme rapes/sexually assaults him. The stalker plot point is not explored in depth and is just a means to an end (that end being the mc realizing he (for some reason) likes the love interest) instead of being a way to flesh out the characters and bring a deeper understanding of their individual mentalities. Bref, this is plain.
Sono Suki Honto
Would've been even better as a shounen ai in my opinion. The sex felt kind of out of nowhere and I think establishing a relationship based on respect, platonic love and romantic love would've been perfect for them after having such a bad sexual relationship. I'm not saying they should be asexual, I'm saying the sex felt like it was "earned" or something, like a quota a yaoi has to fulfill. Regardless, cute characters and cute art style :).
My Sadistic Master