Yukemuri Journey
It gets really irritating when they keep teasing you like they are about to have sex and interrupted. It was the same thing every chapter with some occasional wet dream fantasy that made the story more confusing. It's like the mangaka couldn't draw sex or something since the dumbest excuses would cause them to stop. Sorry kiddos, if your parents or brother/sister/friend walk in on you getting hot and heavy, don't be stingy and just keep going. I'm not going to let the mood be ruined just because someone walks in the room. I've even had people masturbate in the same room while watching me have sex with my lover. But I guess I just think it's retarded to get embarrassed. Just get over yourself. Anyway, rant over. The characters and premise were cute... but it's just not complete or clear wtf is going on.
Sekai wa Shippo de Dekiteiru
Really sweet story. Someone, please, draw the dicks! It's so lame that they whiteout the dicks during sex. No bullshit or drama, just a lustful wold taking a devoted uke.
Ai no Kotoba mo Shiranaide
too many stories that were too short. 1/3-shots, not even one-shots
Kedamono Nanbiki?
Drawings with words... It's way too rushed and a jumbled storyline. Frequent sex but not really erotic enough to justify the poor story. It just seemed very amateur.
Kyou Kara Omega ni Narimashita
Cute story, but too much insecurity and bickering. Only one short round of sex when they realized they love each other at the end. They should have made it the grand finale and drawn out the sex and made it hotter than all the other times. Not really a fan of the absurd idea of an omegaverse... it seems ridiculous, but it did have a fluff happy ending.
Ai to Makoto (Moriyo)
Not a fan of omegaverse themes... but it's such a delicious story about twins picking up a third to spoil rotten sexually!
Romantic Joutou
Once again - not a fan of omegaverse other than they usually have copious amounts of fuckery, but it was still a sweet story overcoming the difficulties of choosing a partner despite being mismatched as genders.
Night Milk Heads
Decent uncensored smut yaoi, but really choppy dialogue and disconnected flow of the story. It made little sense, either lost in translation or just made for fanservice.
Koi wa Kataru ni, Ochiru Mono
Adorable short story. Please put the penises back in, someone...
Ashita, Kare no Bed de.